Kite Andou lived his life completely and die without any regrets, though unfortunately for him, he needs to save worlds after meeting a certain system.
System: I'm The Worlds Saving System! Nice to meet you, Host! \^0^/
Kite: ......
'Did I read too much novels?'
After saving many worlds after, Kite felt that the villains seem to be suspicious...
Kite: What are you doing?
Villain: *acts innocent* Hm?
Kite: *looks suspiciously and started walking faster*
Villain: *follows*
Kite looked back angrily: You're following me!
Villain: *continue to act innocent and blinked at him cutely*
Kite faltered
Kite: System, the targets are acting weird...
System: *acts innocent and act cute*
Villain: *peeked from the corner* I'm here.
Kite: .....They're definitely after me! Help!
Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉
Hello, the author is going to leave a super bias review here... *whisper* Enjoy reading and if possible, I would like to hear some of your opinions about it... That's all, bye. *shyly hides again*
Author. Thank you for your work but I am also sorry for distubing you. I was scanning at Noveltoon/Mangatoon and found your book there being uploaded by a person named "carma". Is this you or is this person or user a thief? Thank you
I am very excited to read this story. The idea is fantastic, and discovering new worlds and plots is very intriguing. The writer has potential, and I am eager to read and find out how the story develops.
I think the plot is a bit rushed. World building is a tiring process but it's necessary, especially for the quick transmigration plot like this one. Character design, it's not just about appearance but also personality and their quirks. You need to explain their background and behavior clearly. There's many errors in writing. Maybe use a line or "****" to separate between characters point of view or different set in the story. overall, it's a little hard to read and enjoy. sorry.
The story about soulmates - the MC host and the ML villain, who will meet in every world. It is little bit cliche story, because villain is almost every time pitiful sacrifice, crazy man who wants to destroy the world and MC ...a light in his tragic life. It is not boring, it is story for those who like this kind of story
Nice** I enjoyed the story. Quick transmigration have always been fun to read and this is one of the good ones. The only problem I have with the book is the locked chapters at 20 chapters. This is an original not a Qidan translation. Is it a new scheme of Webnovel or the authors personal choice.
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I just started to read this novel, not finished yet though. So far I'm enjoying it. I love how you design kite! I will continue to read to find out more to see what will happen next!
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Ding! ding! ding! System book alert! . . . This is an overall great read. ♥ ♥ The stability of updates is pretty impressive. And how the author did not quit on the story from two years ago, is definitely applaudable. ♥ I love the plot of the book. The troubles that the MC would go through to fulfill his mission is totally attractive to me. Thank you author, for drafting out your beautiful imagination into words. [img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=update]
Already in love with the book so much, as it's dragging me out of my reality, Can't wait to read it further about what happens next!!! Auther-Nim keep goinggg!! Fighting!!!! [img=recommend]
Very interesting and addicted novel! Good start and synopsis. The language that the author used is also entertaining. I love how the author describes the characters' interactions and thoughts. I am also intrigued by the novel's plot while reading it and can't wait to read more. Definitely, adding it to my collection. Good job, author!
This is such a unique premise! I love how the protagonist carries out missions for the system, and how the author builds upon this intriguing setup with fully fleshed out character development and humor! Tense when it needs to be, poignant, and lighthearted in turn, this is well worth your read!
An excellent novel with a gripping storyline, likeable cast of characters and a very responsive author who clearly cares about their audience. Excellent work.