I think, the story has a lot of potential. And with more chapters this can get really great, but I do think there's scope for improvement. Chapters don't really have to be small you can write a lot in a single chapter. There isn't many chapters put any critic on so for whatever we have here, I am impressed but I expect much more! And I'll be looking forward to upcoming chapters :)
4 years ago
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InfinitelySleepy
Hello fellow Author/Reader! Your story has a lot of potential right off the bat! I would like to have read more to give you a more detailed review! Keep the chapters coming!
I think, the story has a lot of potential. And with more chapters this can get really great, but I do think there's scope for improvement. Chapters don't really have to be small you can write a lot in a single chapter. There isn't many chapters put any critic on so for whatever we have here, I am impressed but I expect much more! And I'll be looking forward to upcoming chapters :)
Hello fellow Author/Reader! Your story has a lot of potential right off the bat! I would like to have read more to give you a more detailed review! Keep the chapters coming!