In attack on titan with madaras powers

hello this is the story author this is my first book today you guys shall expect 2 more chapters but if I fail I will make 4 more chapters tomorrow as I said in the descreption of the novel that I am still a beginner at english so i will have a lot of splling mestakes I apologize for that i am 12 years old and I really like reading and writing and this is my first ever chapter from all 4 chapters of AOT because right now there is a season 4 and i will keep on writing every day and week. Enjoy

It's a really nice book, the story is powerful and is very captivating. The only problem is the grammar, but that's fine! :) [img=exp][img=coins][img=fp]

I like the idea but the realization is too bad. The grammar, the timeskips, the characters, all of these are not realized good enough! The novel needs improvements in grammar, and need to give more details. These are the overall problems of the novel.

Hello, everyone, I am sorry for not writing for the past couple of weeks don't worry I wrote two days ago and I will start writing Tomorrow (if I can/Have time to do so) I will try to do two chapters and if I couldn't I am sorry so here is the new timetable for publishing chapters 1 on all weekdays there will be no chapters uploaded but on Tuesday I will upload on Friday I will write a chapter for this story and on Saturday I will write a chapter for my other book (My Leviathan System) so yea enjoy :)