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As an avid one piece fan this is amazing!! The attention to detail and the link to the original storyline makes it all the more awesome!! Please keep them coming!

I read till chapter 79. Why he doesnt want to train haki or the six power of marine? I get it he is magician but come on bro, he needs a backup plan when his power doesnt work, haki and the six power of marine are the answer. He's so stubborn

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I stopped reading at chapter 79 because the MC acts too stupid at times. he doesn't bother to listen to anyone's advice about body training and only deems himself right. He has also ignored his orders or rather that he was not chosen for a mission and went there anyway. That's simply insubordination and would not be allowed in the navy at any cost. Although the storyline is good and he is also practices a lot but he just ignores everything else other than spiritual power.

Just here to balance the author 5 starring 10 times. I mean one time is okay as a review but 10/12 reviews are by yourself come on dude xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Currently @chap38: So far the development of the story is good. The power of the MC is quite unique compared to other one piece fanfics. However, there are problems that needs to addressed because it is really important towards the later development of the story. The first problem is that the author lacks creativity in using the power of the MC. So far, about each level of magic, the MC only uses one skill/spell. Shouldn't there other types of spells at the same level?? Lastly, all spells are offensive type with no varieties. There are a lot of ways in using magic you know?? And also, I see what you did there. Creating multiple accounts to raise your rating higher and putting it in the novel section instead of the fanfic section to eliminate competition. It’s not that relevant to the fic but damn, that’s definitely a sign of someone not confident of their work. All in all, It’s promising.

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