Game of Thrones: King Business - Tommen OC/SI

The best part about this novel you ask? It's that our MC doesn't have any power or any golden finger. (Well he does have the future knowledge) It really brings the meaning "TO GAME OF THRONES", with all the mind games, schemes and back stabbing. Looking forward for more chapter. And great work AUTHOR SAN 👏🤝

This is an easy 5 stars. The writing quality is beyond what you normally see in this site: grammar, formatting etc. The MC is exactly what you expect from a ruthless businessman without being angsty or cringe worth. MC surprised me almost every chapter with how he plays the game of thrones. Overall awesome. Hope for more. Keep the chapters coming!!!!

Quality writing, clever dialogue, and somewhat realistic. Truly an amazing read, especially for those who are tired of reading brainless MCs. People need to understand, what the author is doing, is not easy by any means. Each chapter is filled with suspense, and intrigue and I find myself surprised, which is a nice change. My onlu comment to the author would be, to incorporate more character POVs of different characters, maybe even touch on events happening outside King's landing at least once in a while. It's just a suggestion, but I'm sure it would elevate the story even more.

For this site, this is one of the best 'game of throne' fanfics. No stupid 'give me talking system' or ' I want Sharingan with 1000 no Jutsu lose your brains Mangekyō crap. This is not about mc being a physically super strong braindead fool, but mc trying to be a successful king and not dying like his predecessors. Afterall kings rule NOT fight in the front lines. Moreover, mc is ruthless and pragmatic not and RETARDED pussy, who wants to help everybody like a cuck. Moreover no stupid bullshit like reducing his own powers into something like... dare I say it 'constitutional monarchy'. Basically, mc is intelligent and tries to improve his position like a sane person would do in his position. Afterall if you treat your kingdom like your property then everybody will be happy as a successful king doesn't want his property mismanaged.

Writing is amazing. The way he sometimes rhymes the sentences make it feel like you're reading some thick old fantasy book. The characters development is good. MC isn't stupid and that is enough to get 5 star on this site. Congratulations, author. You've created a masterpiece. This novel would've been in top 10 if it had a daily release schedule from the the one. But, author is working hard now.

one of the absolute best fanfictions I've read in the last while with actuall well written dialog and good grammar I dont know how many fanfics I've read that have good ideas but were excited poorly because of the dialogue or the grammar which made them unreadable but this is excellent and very well written

A wonderfully written story that can stand tall with pride. Many other fan fictions with hundreds of chapters are far inferior to this novel despite only having about twenty at the time of my review. This is without a doubt the best Game of Thrones fan fiction if you discredit The Great Lion which has been on hiatus for three months. You really can't ask for much more. Writing Quality is flawless. Stability of Updates seems to be one a day which is awesome. Story and character's have been enjoyable thus far. World Background is just classic GOT that we all know and love.

Dark and ruthless mc...... 100% great fic, the dialogue is waaaaaay better than other counterparts and fics, theres not much misspelling and word errors, truly a great fic highly recommended 👌👌👌👌

What can I say. I love it, the MC adapts quickly and has a peculiar mind, he is unpredictable, he surprised me more than once when I thought he understood. he knows how to handle and use the nature of other people. He moves quickly and efficiently to his goals 👏🏻

Very good story so far. Not having a headache reading a story full o grammar mistakes is a relief. Hoping for more. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

10/10 so far. As long as chapter keep updated regularly, it has the potential to be one of the best fanfics. Love the character interactions and the story is very realistic. Grammar is good and MC is just...

Love it. Good story. Focuses more on the Manipulation and political side of Game of Thrones, many fanfictions don't. Also is very realistic. don't drop my friend

Not a grand fan-fic BUT still miles above the average work on webnovel, well written and with a good pace. Characters that are not the MC are kinda lacking in smartness, just the sudden change in behavior from tommen would make more than one people think especially if you consider how good they are at the game. Still very good

Very good story, has politics, is dark, somewhat realistic and is more focused on the manipulations of the game of thrones. So far very good and recommended.