Keepers
The waters that housed the harbinger lay before him. He could make out her form floating in the water. He wouldn't try to reach her, not yet but the time was not long in coming. Soon he would have the power she comands and with it his will would rise and the world it will conquer.
A devilish grin slipped onto his face and grew, his laugh rang out bouncing on the walls of the cave and echoing through its halls. Anyone within earshot had already been erased. He looked behind him to the guardian laying dead on the floor. The corpse would be found and the death reported until it reached the keepers' ears. 'Let them come' he thought, he would show them true power.
With that he turned and left the cave.
* * * *
Ripples in the water awaken the harbinger from her thousand year slumber. The strings have been tampered with, a world is dying, fate must be restored.
Sinister forces are at play, the peace of the world is threatened. The keepers must once again rise to the call of their harbinger
I can fantasize about the overall novel, it's very amazingly written, and the characters stood very politely build. Keep up the good work, author!
There is such creative use of words, it really engages the reader. The novel itself is like its painted, you can imagine the beautiful descriptions and all. Really fascinating, Great job!
Sooo Amazing. I definitely recommend this novel to everyone. with just a peek on the first chap, i already got hooked, it's also very satisfying read. I am so excited to see this novel be completed...
The descriptions are so vivid, I thought I am a part of the book. I like how you artistically use words for us to be teleported in a new dimension. Reading this makes me happy! a few errors but not noticeable enough to ruin the plot. Nicely done!
A fascinating read, I was impressed by the use of words that created the beautiful picture. And the story development, this is one of those books that draws you close in amusement. Just beautiful
A really nice book. The characters are very relatable and the way every idea is represented is amazing. I haven't gone far but based on what I've read, I like it. Well done author
The correct use of words in every chapter never failed to amuse me. The Author had a great writing style which captivated readers. An interesting storyline too! Kudos!
I'll just say i read this instead of paying attention in class cuz it's really magical, really well made and overall it's perfect!! keep it up!!!
The story is amazing you can relate to the characters and it beautiful,,,the author has done an amazing job and the plot flows really nicely so nice work. I could read it all the time
After reading a couple of chapters...The author has done an amazing job and It intrigued me so much that I could read again & again...Very promising characters...Looking forward in reading more chapters...Highly recommended book...Great work, Author!
It is so captivating, I love the way you detailed the story it really is so interesting... can't wait for more updates in your story, Kudos for this interesting and unique story👏
Wow. What a captivating story with very relatable characters and very good world background. The author is definitely talented, I totally recommend this. Keep up the good work, author
fantasy stories makes me pump up! i love the story plot and setting and how the characters make their way through the story! the imagination of the author is a *mwah* keep up the good work author! highly recommended!
I'm excited about the plan! I love the flow! I'm looking forward to read more! Highly recommended! Great job! Keep it up. I'm currently reading it. And the more I read, the more I get curious.
W.O.W I'm simply amazed at this amazing work and the effort the author use to describe the scenarios, you can see it while you are reading it! It's an amazing piece, and I hope to see more about this book! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]