Game of Thrones: Rise of the North [Dropped]

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Great Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it started well but it turned into garbage, first came that old blind man with sacrificial bullshit, I continued to read thinking it would get better but then they kill the MC’s wife, I drank, pure garbage, I should change the name of this work to GAME OF THRONES: UM OLD BLIND WITH FETISH IN KILLING SACRIFIED PEOPLE

so far good...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1 star on Stability of updates for using cheap tricks to get 15k words. Writing quality seems fine... but you are still on -5k words for first chapter so I will remove 2 stars from this category as well. Story dev. for now it's basically Game of thrones. Not yet creative or unique vibes here. 3 stars. Character design? 1 star. We have MC. Which wasn't really much for design. World background. 1 star. Stolen not modified. At least not yet. I will come back here to check if you improved those aspects and paid your debt for 13k words in first chapter. If you do I will remove this review and post new with better score. Good luck. Winter is cumming.

Overall a very good story so far, with little mistakes. I suggest getting a proof-reader before publishing. ....................................................................................................

I don't have problems with the world background or grammatical errors as it was okay to me .but the main problem is mc.he is contradicting himself a lot.even before getting reincarnated ,he already thinks the canon characters as his.... blood family members.this fic is becoming more and more of a wish fulfilment.yeah fanfiction are wish fulfilment but this story is....just too much.....and I don't have the tolerance to read some of the actions done by the mc...so good luck author.dont read this story if u don't like wish fulfilment mc's

so far I love it...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

If you don't start reading immediately, Zurvan will curse YOU!!!! **************************************************************************

Absolutely love this book and its use of a ck2 system as ut really makes it unique and interesting rather then the generic system most use.

More updates are expecting. I hope you don't drop this. I really enjoy this fanfic. Another perspective of Games of Thrones. The death of Catlyn was really regrettable.

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Great got fanfic here! With CK2 unique trait and attributes, hes make good mc but not too op. Im here just waiting for great scene that will appear and of course more adlt scene lol

The book just started, but so far its a good start. Different from all of you usual GOT book of boys fighting or commanding armies (not that thy are bad )but this is like a new spin on it. Good job so far and keep going!