Marvel’s Omnitrix

the mc is so bland. and he doesnt even try to to gain master control. letting himself to the whims of the story.

Master4thWall I already told you i surrender... stop touching my in places while saying its all for your marvel fic.

How to say, I know 4thWall well since I've read almost all of his works but the thing is his MC here I can't seem to like it. In his other works MC there was very good and very well made but here MC acts like Ben Tennyson instead of a reincarnated individual who got his past memories. I don't know if this will get better since it only has 15 chapters now. But this is my current rating for now. #No Hate diehard fans

Not a fan of the Author as all his previous works were mediocre if not outright bad, (in my personal opinion) as I disliked the overall direction they went and the MC's were just outright not likable in any way whatsoever. But, I'm willing to give this one more of a chance as there are very few Ben 10 fics and the few I have read are either in limbo due to authors being MIA or outright dropped. (except for one, which is set in Black Clover) Hence the middle of the road rating, if it turns out to still be good after 120+ chapters (as that's usually where I start to notice things going downhill) I will change this rating at that time to a more accurate one with what's written up to that point.

Great so far keep it up I hope Wanda, Polaris Lorna,Magik Illyana Rasputin, Jean grey and Madelyn Pryor are in the harem

It's great to have another Ben 10 fanfiction. Are you going to include elements from all the Ben 10 series or just the original timeline? I hope from all the series since that would give you more content to explore. And what version of the Omnitrix is ​​this?

As much as I like this author, still, I have some about this work. First, his previous try with marvel (both tries actually) lead to nothing, which is sad. And second, which is much more crucial, it's a mix of marvel and ben10. I know about the author's love for crossovers. But it can't work here. It's not a mha, which has shown only the USA and Japan, and we can imagine any hero and character as a part of this world, but from a different country. And it's not the light crossovers he did in crossovers One Piece with Senju, and DxD with small-fry anime worlds. Here we have two Multiverses, with explored cosmos, with different nations, powerhouses, etc. I can't imagine the race of x-aliens (not remembering the name) live alongside with marvel dudes. But f*ck them, what about the creator of Omnitrix? What about the organization in which Max works? How is it possible with spies from scrulls integrated with humanity? With Odin watching over the Earth (as it supposed to be, though). There is also corpus of bucket-head space rangers (corpus Nova I guess), how they interact with each other? Many questions, I hope u will give answers and won't drop this work. Best regards

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It's Master4thwall. This might sound silly but that name is enough to give five star for me. If he did something really horrible I will come back to change my review. But I doubt that would happen consider the lengthy history he has. In these dire times where translations, Ai generated and Ai refined dominate our space, I hope this one becomes one of the shining hope in the rankings. good luck to you. and cook well! !

As much as I like your books, I like the comment section of your books even more. It's full of true degenerates and just feels like home to me. I'm more invested in reading the comments than the book itself... xD Anyway, this is definitely another masterpiece! [img=recommend]

A nice story if a bit unpractical. I mean mc knows this is marvel and the potential beings he has to face but he seems like he is just satisfied with baseline human physicality. The chapters till now has portrayed him as having a straight up heroic personality on Peter Parker levels which though admirable is harsh for him being like that. Grandpa max straight up did not give him an opinion to choose what he wanted to do and said that he should help others and they straight up went for magneto which worked out at the end? I hoped for a more pragmatic Ben considering he is an adult and had to past life experience but bro just going with the flow man. But considering there is less than 10 chapters let’s see where this story will lead.

Well let's get into it. Knowing master4thwall this is probably going to be another banger!

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