Across time
After the queen died, the king introduced young princess Amari to her butler.
The butler has a lot of admirers from the palace, however, he never acts upon their attraction. He was taught to never tie any strings to anybody especially from the royalties. Their positions made it impossible for them to go along with each other. The moment he aquired attraction for the princess, he panicked and kept his distance from her. Little did he know, she felt the same way.
When the time has come for her to marry a prince, she was devastated, knowing that the butler would be marrying someone else. She ran. She can't bear this news and ran to the forest. Because she was too distracted to look where she was going, she stepped to the ledge of a cliff and fell.
Suddenly, she wakes up to an unfamiliar place, the FUTURE.
I'm intrigued. I want more insight of the main character's thoughts about the butler and how she's faring in her life. Of course, the grammar mistakes won't go unnoticed. Nonetheless, I'm looking forward to see how this would go.
The concept is great overall! Introduction of characters and their morals along with a fraction of their stories gradually told. I like the personalities they carry, but could use a bit more push in the right direction. There are grammar errors here and there, but its nothing a little proofreading can’t fix! Keep up the great work❤️
I love your Novel po, ang ganda lalo na yung way ng pagdescribe mo sa mga characters and also yung plot ang galing.Keeep it upp!!! I'll always support you, stay safe muaaah❤
Good things. the caracter, the quality and the updates. the chapters are short but... are good. The only flaw i found its that there is not yet a current scenario that explain where we are? dark ages? reinesance? victorian era? that could have a big impact on what the caracters can actually do... I hope there is no sms in any chapter or so.... however... ill keep reading it.
That story was amazing ❤ such a verygood author keep it up. Your doing great. I know one day you'll be successful of your life. I'll support you as always. Have good day and godbless you.
I love your concept on this one and how you use the words to describe the events vividly. But, I advice you to check first your paragraphs if there are any errors so that it will be nice. HEHE much loveee<3
The story is very amazing, i wonder what the ending will beee please add some more chapters, I love how the writer describes what the characters were doing it made me understand and imagine the story like in real life i love it
I hope one day you reach your goal on finishing the chapter so well, and help the other readers understand and learn more about themis story, it needs more improvements but this is very interesting to read. I would recommend this to my friends. I like it
I liked how story flow. The plot was far from my imagination but you did grate! It exceed my expectations! I wish I’m one of the character of this story. Looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you author for making such a good novel like this, xoxo❤️