The Rise of Quetzalcoatl

The Rise of Quetzalcoatl

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Author: equuip
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Check out my other novels -

|Arpious of the Planes|

|My Ares System|

|Warlock of Wisdom: My Odin System|

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Same Universe -

|Arpious of the Planes|

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3/21/25, in other words, it was March the 21st, 2025. Humanities technology advanced exponentially throughout the years.



The only thing that they hadn't focused on for a while was space. The endless abyss that they call space was still unknown to them.



Once they colonized their solar system, they thought it wasn't enough. They sent a search party out of their solar system but soon lost contact.



Not long after, Earth lost contact with all of the other planets. Then a huge earthquake shook the earth itself and then portals opened up around the world. Soon monsters came out ravaging and flattening cities.



Only a brave group of humans entered the portals which they then found multiple discoveries on the other side. They found stones that gave them different abilities and monsters a different world with a boss that lets them exit the portal, which was soon called dungeons.



Those 6 friends were then later on called the 6 Primordial Braves.



With the news of this, countries all over the world sent in people to retrieve stones, and then they would crush them, granting them abilities. They would then go back in to retrieve more and hand them out to the public.



500 years passed...



This isn't the story of a hero. It's the story of a weak girl who was ridiculed and bullied every day because of her low status. And due to her cowardly nature, she was unable to fight back, making more people pick on her.



While she was laying in an alleyway, with bruises and cuts all over her body, she saw a green, semi-see-through panel that appeared in front of her. It was like a notification you would see in the VR games from 400 years back. The green panel had a black text that said...



[Would you like to become an Ancient Being?]



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!Spoiler Below!

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At the beginning of the novel, there will be a lot of going back and forth between the MC's personality. Plus, most of the problems, in the beginning, will be centered around herself.



Also, at the beginning of the novel, there is an act of short and sweet revenge that lingers just a bit longer through the story, but this novel is not revenge-based.



The Yuri aspect won't be as heavily used compared to my first novel. The girlfriend is mainly used to help the MC get through the mental box and distorted feelings that the MC has to suffer through at the beginning of the novel.



You might dislike the characters that I made Lucy's friends, but I promise you'll change your mind later on. I think...



Okay, that should be it!



Phew... that was tiring. Time to drink my fourth cup of coffee today...



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500 Power Stones by the weekend = 1 extra chapter

750 Power Stones by the weekend = 2 extra chapters

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Ivan_Ivan_2798
Ivan_Ivan_2798

I like this story .. the background is also more extensive, especially I like the Yuri + Action genre, I'm also looking forward to future developments ..

3 years ago
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Coldstar
Coldstar

Reveal Spoiler

3 years ago
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WhYDoIEVeN
WhYDoIEVeN

The story was quite good, at least up to the point where romance was introduced. Well, let's go to some strong and weak points of the story shall we? Pros: World Building; the world building aspect is quite unique, and it's seen through the eyes of the protagonist, though of course because of this the development of world building would be quite slow and the world isn't exactly fully explained but it gives off a sense of mystery which I quite like but it may not be for everyone. Oh also the story's take on the system is great. 4.6/5 Writing Quality; the paragraphs are very readable, the uses of words is alright, and there are only few grammatical errors. 4.2/5 Updates; This is self explainable, it updates every other day. 4.4/5 Now onto why this story got such a bad score; the Cons: Story Development; now mind you, I was going to originally give this a 4.6 or even 4.7 but then the romance part happen. The pacing is just right and it isn't rushed and slow in any way, there are few plot holes. The problem here is the romance, it's too rushed and by that I mean way too rushed. Sure it's tagged yuri and it'll come eventually but at least you should do so naturally. The romance seems forced, and as of now it doesn't at all fit. 3/5 Characters; Oh boy, do I have a lot to say about this one. Let's first go over the protagonist, a cold, somewhat calculating, and at first extremely revenge driven person. But then Chapter 43 happens and most of her personality is thrown out of the window, You don't just go from potential enemy to pawn and then straight up to lovers. That's not how relationships work, nor how a human mind work either. She's written to have trust issues and seem manipulating, so why just suddenly drop it all instead of developing everything instead? As for the other side characters we have seen way too little of them for me to properly rate the others but for now. 1.8/5 Overall the story is quite good, though weighted down by the sudden massive break of character and romance. Total score: 3.6/5

3 years ago
19
NineTailsOfTheVoid
NineTailsOfTheVoid

The novel was incredible, I was really liking everything until Tiana appeared and everything lost meaning to me once she admits to being emotionally manipulating the MC sincerely the novel is incredible but I can't stand this character of Tiana

3 years ago
17
LonelySpirit
LonelySpirit

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4 years ago
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hpez2301
hpez2301

Reveal Spoiler

3 years ago
4
lstreader
lstreader

Only 10 chapters are out so far, but I am looking forward to more. Plot is good and you get attached to the MC quick. I myself can't wait for the MC to get revenge as well get stronger. Gonna be a good novel I want more.

4 years ago
4
Redfox_Burn
Redfox_Burn

I like the story so far and the characters are likable too especially the MC. I dont have any complaints but I have curiosity. Its just I always wonder who will be Lucy’s future partner/lover. I mean it has a yuri tag on it.

4 years ago
2
Dancemikacin
Dancemikacin

It's good no obvious mistakes needs more chapter for more judgment i like it for now. Also when will she get her noble phantasm? (~^. ^)~(~^. ^)~(~^. ^)~(~^. ^)~(~^. ^)~(~^. ^)~(~^. ^)~

4 years ago
2
WhiteGrizlyBear
WhiteGrizlyBear

15 chapters in and im absolutely loving it. I love the MC and how she’s changed and adapted to become strong. Very excited to see how conflicts evolve. The only thing Id change about this novel is even more chapters being released. Cant wait to read more

4 years ago
2
riley2000_panda
riley2000_panda

read your other book and thought let's go read this one. I love this one. .. .............................................................

4 years ago
2
Myles_Ashton
Myles_Ashton

Looking forward to future chapters. Please take my power stones IfifufufjfufudktsitskgakgsitzktzktzkgxkgzkgxkgxlyxlgxkgxlgxlyxlgxlgzlgxlhgHd

4 years ago
2
NispedanaSan
NispedanaSan

author, I found this by chance, but I think you should've posted this on ML not FL. this may have done much better. Yuri and LitRPG are generally for the ML fandom. You can change this by contacting your CE

10 months ago
1
deadi_rez
deadi_rez

I think the writing can be a little bit confusing at time (just an opinion) overall loved the story .. and writing would be cool if we dove in the lore of the world a bit more like the gods and the monsters

2 years ago
1
ChaosOmega98
ChaosOmega98

I cant seem to read the Last 2 chapters even though I paid for privilged to be able to read them I really enjoy this and need to read more chapters [img=update][img=update]

3 years ago
1