I come to tell you the story of a warrior. Whoever went through challenges, faced feats with courage and strength. Testing his intelligence until the end of time. This story was remembered among many people. His character was forged by the path of life. All the challenges he faced only made him stronger. And although these stories are forgotten over time, or when told more than once they begin to sound trite ... Although, this could be one of them, it is the story of a particular warrior. One that will change his life.
Good job, you are a crack there is still much of the story but I love it until chapter 3 I never do reviews but you are talented and I would like you to keep writing ☺️ aaaaaaaaa I am eager to see!
Excellent. Narrative great, good momentum of development, description incredible atmosphere You have a unique style to define the characters and develop complex situations I have read the first 5 chapters so far and I can say that I recommend it I'm going to follow the story and I hope you get better with each episode! For now five stars!
Jesus Christ! This is the reason why stories by new authors should be read and not just the recommended ones. keep writing, bro! I go in chapter 4 and I am fascinated 😍