This is a candid review of everything I’ve seen about the work, but unfortunately the review may have some errors in the writing making it difficult to read, so if you’re going to read pay attention.
The author is apparently someone 'beginner' so to speak, he does not leave the work too detailed or does most of the basic signs that almost all authors with at least some experience do, in a way is a negative point in the work.
The work itself is quite 'incredible' so to say, is not the best about Naruto but is still interesting, you can spend time and enjoy reading. You need to be patient and remember that the author is not paid to write the work, so you can read it without getting really bothered and having fun with it.
There is a lot of room for improvement(Increase the details, improve character development and many other things), but it is a readable work so if you see reviews with 'this work is garbage' or 'worst work of Naruto', it is just exaggeration.
I’m not good enough to write a review, but I think it should be enough to make you go read and draw your own conclusions.
4 years ago
5
UchihaZenn
Good Novel
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4 years ago
3
HotWetDream
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4 years ago
2
JiangChen73
I hope to improve! If you have any ideas for further development, please comment. I already have some ideas for the future, but if any are better than mine, I can change
high grammatical errors.
the Naruto world is good, bit the writing is worse
2 years ago
0
Bookcultivater
I like the story and hoping it doesn't get dropped.dhghjfewdchjtfcghryhjkgfcdfvjjfswsfcxssdgjkoppouytewqasfghkklmnbcxxgfhhhgffdhjjjgfgyfghkgf
3 years ago
0
idOnTKnOwanYthInG
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3 years ago
0
Daoist423242
It looks promising! Keep it up author aama 😊😊[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a candid review of everything I’ve seen about the work, but unfortunately the review may have some errors in the writing making it difficult to read, so if you’re going to read pay attention. The author is apparently someone 'beginner' so to speak, he does not leave the work too detailed or does most of the basic signs that almost all authors with at least some experience do, in a way is a negative point in the work. The work itself is quite 'incredible' so to say, is not the best about Naruto but is still interesting, you can spend time and enjoy reading. You need to be patient and remember that the author is not paid to write the work, so you can read it without getting really bothered and having fun with it. There is a lot of room for improvement(Increase the details, improve character development and many other things), but it is a readable work so if you see reviews with 'this work is garbage' or 'worst work of Naruto', it is just exaggeration. I’m not good enough to write a review, but I think it should be enough to make you go read and draw your own conclusions.
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I hope to improve! If you have any ideas for further development, please comment. I already have some ideas for the future, but if any are better than mine, I can change
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high grammatical errors. the Naruto world is good, bit the writing is worse
I like the story and hoping it doesn't get dropped.dhghjfewdchjtfcghryhjkgfcdfvjjfswsfcxssdgjkoppouytewqasfghkklmnbcxxgfhhhgffdhjjjgfgyfghkgf
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It looks promising! Keep it up author aama 😊😊[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]