*Walk on the path free of sins. Your life shall be your trial*
Yang Ding was an arrogant Patriarch who wants to make his clan raise to further heights. A lack of resources came in his way.
However, he got hold of a heavenly treasure left by a great immortal.
[System initializing...]
[User registered: Yang Ding]
[Listed tally : ]
[Sloth: 0]
[Gluttony: 0]
[Lust: 25]
[Wrath: 40]
[Greed: 500]
[Envy: 1000]
[The system has identified the user to be a grave sinner. The user's cultivation level would be reduced by a few stages... ]
Yang Ding: "Sh*t"
P.S: The cover isn't mine. If the owner wishes for it I can get rid of it.
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Tbh I cant grab system...But this novel really has unique plot. Rhe writing tells itself how beautifully the author has given his interest to this plot. More power to you. Best of luck in advance
I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it.
I like the concept of your novel a lot and you've executed it quite finely so far. Keep up the good work, and try to fix the grammar. Overall, nice job. Thanks.
An amazing novel with an interesting plot. Read the first chapter and was intrigued by it. The opening was good, dialogues are well written. Narration entices the reader to continue. Will look forward to further chapters. Good luck Author!
Review by author. Well, more than a review it's a note for interested readers. What u can expect: 1. A story with action 2. A setting with power as a core value 3. MC in conflict with his own system 4. MC going from strong-weak-strong 5. An ambitious MC with equally interesting side characters 6. A serious tone unlike my previous works 7. A good plotline What you shouldn't expect: 1. Mindless s*x, yeah there is going to be smut but it is only to help progress the story. 2. Complicated philosophies.
unique type of system, i feel bad author stop writing this masterpiece. pls release volume 2 plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssss
Announcement! I will release extra chapters if this book enters New book ranking by the end of the week!!! top 15= 1extra chapter top 10= 2extra chapter top 5= 3extra chapter
an interesting plot, strong characters, and a vivid world back ground, this novel has a perfect blend of all the qualities of a bestseller, cone and join the author in his journey, you will enjoy it a lot
the story is fresh breath of air among the same old ones, i liked concept and its execution. moreover mass release made my day therefore early review, thank you author.
the story kept me hoked from the start, it is so well described, that i can imagine everything in front of my eyes, the author has done a good work in making every thing realistic.
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The story is fresh and different from what I had r mostly, the system decrease his power.. Wow.. Hope the idea is executed well in further chapters
I love the book and its just ok for me. Its absolutely great and I cant wait for the up coming chaps. Some spell checks should be done but overrall the book is ok and its intriguing.
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