The Imperfections of Prodigies (REWRITING IN PROGRESS)
“The difference between stupidity and genius is that geniuses have their limits.” Albert Einstein, 1963.
Hiroki Izanagi is a 2nd-year high school student. But unlike others, he’s a natural-born genius. A rare phenomenon.A prodigy.
Separated from his parents at the age of 2, Hiroki resided at his uncle’s residence with his elder brother who lived in his shadows. His uncle was a very vile man. To him, Hiroki was nothing but a puppet, and he was the puppeteer.
With his abnormally high intellect, he was loved and valued. But behind all of that love, is a tremendous herd of loathers. So what? You thought being a genius is all lucky, didn’t you? No, he was resented! Because of something that was completely out of his control.
Ah, but worry not, all of his dreadful sorrows will come to an end, like most books. There’s no story without an ending. Of course, this is no exception. But in life, every ending is just a new beginning. All the happenings ‘till now, his sufferings, his cries, were merely the prologue. Now, let’s start the first chapter, shall we?
On a seemingly ordinary day, an unidentified man led a group to attack their dwelling. Many perished and many were wiped out. When things looked hopeless, an odd man in a white suit spoke to Hiroki; and asked some strange and impactful questions. The last question hit him hard. A second chance. An offer of a lifetime. At the time, he didn’t have any idea how eventful his life will be, just because of one, short conversation.
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I like the story so far, it's been just the first chapter and it's already this tense. I'm gonna tune in to this, I hope that it will reach my expectations later on.
Only one chapter published so far, but this one is definitely going to be a wild ride. The story opens with the protagonist lying in rubble and slowly dying, only to be visited by someone who appears to be a demon of some kind and potentially given a second chance at life. Story-wise, there is not a whole lot to go on so far, but the chapter is very well-written and the author does a great job conveying the protagonist's confusion about his predicament to the reader - taking the reader along for the ride alongside the main character. Spelling and grammar are quite good, with only one or two noticeable typos that can easily be fixed up in editing. The thing that really stood out was the humor. I feel humor works best in strange and quirky tales like this and I feel like the author has a good grasp of expressing humor through his writing. Hope the author keeps up the great work. Look forward to seeing where this story goes in future installments. I've already added to my library.
This is nice for the initial chaps! I am impressed with the author's imagination and how he portrayed his imagination to the flesh. Making me wonder how good he is. The psychological parts was very unique and making the novel to have its own charm. Kudos and good luck on reaching a million views!
Very well written! While there is only one chapter, it was very entertaining to read, sucking you in the more you read. I have very high expectations for this novel. (❁´◡`❁)
Loving the story so far. the plot is absolutely amazing and I love the lead. [img=update][img=recommend][img=coins]. I highly recommend this story to all. you won't be disappointed I know I wasn't
Overall, it's an engaging story despite the number of chapters uploaded so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
Should I just say amazing! the cover and title already had my attention and well when I started reading!!!!!! yes there were some grammar mistakes but who that white hair guy, I am already in love with him XD but keep this amazing story rolling, let it shine 🌟
Everything was great characters pacing and background description and there was also good humour overall pretty it was a good read great job.
Izanagi's intellect is quite stonks. Great synopsis, btw. An intriguing synopsis for the readers to read. The descriptive words is enough for me to be hooked, immersed even and we have the same character's name (Hiroki) but I used it as a surname. Quite a coincidence of the same name but that's cool. Give this a try to read, guys!
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Very good! I can't help but be sad at the number of chapters thus far. Writing quality is very neat. But I still can't grasp the point of the story. I have a feeling it's going to be sad later on but even so I still enjoyed it!
This was surprisingly decent! The writing quality is really good too, gives me Harry Potter vibes. The characters are really amusing. Also, so far I think Aarth's my favorite ^_^ Can't wait to see how this story goes on.
If the reviews aren't fake, then this should have been really amazing! Can anyone tell me if he really rewrote the story and where I can read it?
Interesting story. Your anime infuences are obvious but that is not a problem. Excellent flow. The dialogues are in harmony with the inner monologues. Good work,keep going.
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