Dream Trip { HIATUS! ]

> Harem : I don't know if there will be one yet . > This is my first time writing a story so go easy on me. > English is not my native language, if there are any grammatical mistakes please correct me.

gotta be honest, I have no clue whats going on and its kind of pointless, in the first 10 chapters I dont think there's an actual paragraph of good writing its just a block of text to do with some stupid abilities that don't need explaing, its not a story its a stat sheet so I don't understand how this 'story' has such a high rating unless they are bots or he deletes bad reviews ill see if this gets deleted anyway because the only people that would rate this highly are people that would think reading stats in wow is a good read.

I like it hipe u just do merlin been waiting for someone to do her and i dont want 80 girls plus merlin fits him also kids would be cool love to see mom merlin

Já que o autor é br, vou escrever em português mesmo. Cara, é bem daora para ler e passar o tempo, mas ia melhorar muito se tu descrevesse mais as cenas.

I've lost all my brain cells... Aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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Autor br= 5 estrelas 😟 historia divertida pra passar o tempo .... capitulos curtos mc dahora ...........................................

This is a rather confusing review for me. I honestly quite like both the idea of the story as well as how the story goes. So overall, I quite like the story! But the thing is, I can't enjoy reading this. The way in which the story is written is just so hard to read. As I read it, it just feels like I'm constantly reading a character stat sheet or something. Sometimes I can't even tell if there's an interaction between two characters or not. Overall, great idea and story, but the writing causes it to be so much worse.

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this story is getting me hyped so please don't drop it author 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Do you have any discord server for images????? . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .

I like op mc too!!!! And harem if you can add it!! But if you don't want then its ok Bdznzjtxktsmy eww yrsl6 ra j DxD lysjfcmfajyfktraiyfktdotdjtdktsi6fktsu

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