Into the abyss

Take a cliche situation, and make it better. The author did exactly that. You have your cold handsome yet gentle (even if outwardly ruthless) Male MC. You have your damsel in distress female lead (who can kick balls when necessary). You put them together in a fairy tale, then dial up the 'Interesting' nob all the way to the max! And you have this. Kudos to author.

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉

When I read it, I could feel the delicacy the author put into writing it. It's like being in the novel itself, I could feel tons of emotions swirling inside me whenever I read it! This will be a great novel one day, no, more like, one of the best! :> keep improving and do not stop writing!!

At first I thought it was the prototype story of Sanderella But as events unfolded and with all the Greek gods that made me feel strange I do not deny that the story was amazing, whether how you combined dream and truth or from how you narrated the story so that you make the reader live the events of the story. You did a great job

Well, couldn't you guess I love Greek Myths, right? This novel will make you love it too! Epic prologue ( think of Evanescence MVs)! Hats off! First, it has an incredibly romantic appeal with solid and classic archetypes, a relatable MC, and a good grasp of structure, pace, and plot. But, more than technical aspects, it's hopefully romantic and you will fall in love with it! A promising novel, really!

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The prologue was AMAZING! I feel that itself was sufficient to get me glued to it. I liked the use of vocabulary. The plot of the story of story is intriguing. I liked the MC of this story and world building about it. There are minor issues with the novel but completely ignorable. Other than that, story has potential and very well written. And I am looking forward to future chapters, keep up the good work :)

I have one word for this, amazing! I like how i was captivated by the story plot and it drags me into the story from just the first part of it! There were detailed descriptuon of things that can help visualize the story better and it also helps give off a fantasy like feeling to it! I would definitely recommend this story! It was a good read overall and i hope to see more of this! Keep up the great work of yours author!! ✨[img=recommend]

My first thought was cliche. But, unknowingly I'm already inside the world created by the author? Huh? The writing was subtle, chaotic, and engaging, silently pulled you in without the chance to resist. Need to be careful, or else this will be addictive.

At first, I thought it was related to some kind of vampire stuff and all. Then, later I came to know that it isn't. The work is based on Greek mythology. I used to love this concept. But, I have read so many novels that it has become a normal plot setting for me. Still, the author tried to bring the change by introducing Luna and her involvement with God. So, I can appreciate that. The writing quality is decent and very understandable. I did find many errors in the prologue. But, the synopsis says ~ it's going under a huge revision so I'll overlook that for now. Story development was good too. I liked the characters so far. The world is vast and that is why I think the pacing is slow, which I understand. To show such a vast world, it will require a lot of words to make your readers fully immerse into the chapters and your world. Overall, it was a good read and I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!!

A really interesting beginning! Have only read the first five chapters, but this definitely goes into my library and I will look forward to updates.

This book is pretty awesome! If you like a good story with elements of horror, mystery and greek mythology told in a new perspective, you've got to check this one out! Great job author! I love your creative mind. Keep it up! [img=recommend]

Beautiful storyline with great characters and story development. I like the fresh idea you put and every chapter has me hooked for more! Just can't get enough.

I always like supernatural involvement in novels. This book had a interesting concept of how the lord of the underworld got interested in a human. Worth A Read!