His Rare Flower
This story?
It goes back to the time of the medieval period. The era of king and queen. Treachery and Loyalty.
A girl whose leading knowledge is highest. A boy who is himself a leader.
A girl who is naive to the big words. A boy who never fails to answer her.
The common thing?
The love towards their kingdom and making it safest for the ones who live there.
The difference?
He was called the beast. She was called beauty.
He was the one to give the answer. She was one curious soul.
He kept her beside. She followed him through the storm.
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Join the pair, Alexander and Isabella, in their interesting journey of responsibility, naivety, some quotes, fighting abilities, and the storm which they talk about.
There is some romance too. Love is in the air, but not physically present. But you will need to feel it.
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Chapter-1 &2 contain the past of both. Can skip if would like to. But read if you want to know about the past.
The current picture on the book cover does not belong to me. It belongs to its rightful owner.
https://www.deviantart.com/wisnutan/art/Love-in-The-middle-of-War-514174030
I think this story is off to a really great start. I think the world you've created is very interesting and your way of writing is very unique. Keep it up can't wait to read more!
I really like the idea of the plot, it's interesting and different to most books on Webnovel. The writing quality is quite good, the two main characters are very dynamic together - a king and a queen that both had a bad past and didn't choose their role as a leader but manage to make it work. The paragraphs may be a bit long at times, I'd advise the author to pay more attention to it. Overall I recommend this book! :)
The story has potential. It has an interesting premise. It flows nicely, well-written, and the story is progressing well. The only problem I think is that the wall of paragraph in the beginning. Don't worry, it will lessen... a bit. It might put off others with the chunk of text while others will enjoy the story despite the format. Goodluck to the author!
After reading I can relate the title with the story. I thought that I might lose interest but nothing like this happened and I kept reading. I liked it, though there are some mistakes like switching between past and present yet it does not make reading and understanding harder. All in all, keep writing[img=recommend]
Interesting story great beginning just the character description and world background but apart from .that the story is good just need to work on it a little more
Okay, let me just say it was SUPER rare I add anything to my library. So congrats on that. I have been enjoying this so far. I feel it is very well written and the flow is nice. I connect with the MC's a lot and enjoy the idea.
The overall concept was really captivating and I would honestly love to read more stories where love relations and smut are not the central element. The characters do feel psychologically believable, like when the author describes the trauma of loneliness and rootlessness. I really like the way the author views the human mind. This story is worth reading, even though there are some points where you just feel so sorry for the characters lol
I'd say this is an interesting concept. The first chapter is quite intriguing, pulling the reader to itself. From the few chaps that I read, I'd say this could be a really great novel. Keep it up!
Interesting concept of human and interactions with wolves. I admire the author’s resolve to have a clean story without smut. It is a very nice story for younger audiences.
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Very great start! The descriptions are really well-written and detailed for the readers to understand! The only thing that I'd like to point out is the writing style. There are tenses mixed up with each other (especially on the first few chapters), passive voice misuse (such as "was walking" to "walked" and others) Besides that, kudos for the author!
I never thought that I will ever read a story of medieval period and I was never even interested in history, but I have to say WOW!!!!!! The author did an amazing job to create the story. The description of the world, characterization and plot everything is awesome. I wrote too much but it was worth reading.
Good start.Intresting outline, I love the world background and the character who will rise from the ashes. The author has done a good job of presenting the character and the problems he will face with royalty. Please continue to update more the story is enjoyable and readable.
Okay!! When I began reading, I couldn't drop the book till I got to Chap 5 and I had to sleep. It is such an interesting tale...showing the purity of the author's heart. I can feel the author's simplicity through this work and it makes me smile. I will just say that probably, English isn't the author's first language. Other than that, I like the plot! Keep it up!
I think your story is very interesting, the world you have created is amazing and so are your characters, they were described well and your story has a lot of potential. All in all wonderful work and keep it up.