It has a very unique start, honestly, I like how the author pours a lot of effort into the personality of the characters, they mesh together to form a variety of emotions that are described accordingly by every sentence, I can see the potential this story has, and it is amazing!
4 years ago
4
ugly_potats
I loved the flow of the story. The characters are well made. I really loved the story! The author did a good job! Kudos! Can't wait for the next update [img=recommend]
4 years ago
4
Aziliwe01
Great story
Honestly!
I love the prologue and the way the writer describes the personalities.
I recommend to read the book, it really is quite fun to read.
4 years ago
3
zd4zaasa
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
4 years ago
2
Etherealthewriter
For the characters to the prologue to the story itself. love it! This is a very interesting story and i cant wait to read more. Well done author!
4 years ago
2
Megana4
Interesting storyline. Very promising characters. The writing style is well written. The story developed very well throughout the chapters. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
4 years ago
2
Vee_bee
Very interesting and adventurous storyline. Although I have not read a lot of chapters I already really love the book and can't so reading.
Good luck author
4 years ago
2
Emelie_Guerta
This is so awesome. I don't thin I have encountered or read an Eastern Fantasy Genre before, but this is a good start. I love how the author made the characters as well as the story line. Kudos to you author!
3 years ago
1
Wendrila_Kundu
This book is totally awesome. I enjoyed reading so far and I wanna go till the end. Good work author. Though it's a new genre but Loved your book.
3 years ago
1
Chira_Daruma
This is so cool! I love how the author writes the story, I am not a fan of eastern fantasy but it did get my interest. I love how the author describe each character. Kudos to you! Keep it up![img=recommend]
3 years ago
1
steph_pesi
I'm not sure I've come across Eastern fantasy before, but so far I'm liking this. I love the main character thoughts and the fluidity between all characters. How they all relate together in the novel. Looking forward to more characters.
4 years ago
1
kellii
The synopsis is really catchy. I love the way the Author write this story, it was unique and far from the common! Love how the describe the main chracters! Good job Author! Kudos!
4 years ago
1
NakhariSong
From the first chapter, you feel the atmosphere of adventure, I love it, this story has a lot of potential! It's very exciting, I hope I can read more [img = recomendar]
4 years ago
1
Quesiyahxx
Very interesting start to the story and very very unique writing style. The first chapter itself got me really intrigued. Amazing job author, please keep it up
4 years ago
1
Nande_K
Actually I love how the story has a unique great start. I love how the characters are being groomed. This will turn out into a great story, patiently waiting for the next update. Keep it up writer.
It has a very unique start, honestly, I like how the author pours a lot of effort into the personality of the characters, they mesh together to form a variety of emotions that are described accordingly by every sentence, I can see the potential this story has, and it is amazing!
I loved the flow of the story. The characters are well made. I really loved the story! The author did a good job! Kudos! Can't wait for the next update [img=recommend]
Great story Honestly! I love the prologue and the way the writer describes the personalities. I recommend to read the book, it really is quite fun to read.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
For the characters to the prologue to the story itself. love it! This is a very interesting story and i cant wait to read more. Well done author!
Interesting storyline. Very promising characters. The writing style is well written. The story developed very well throughout the chapters. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
Very interesting and adventurous storyline. Although I have not read a lot of chapters I already really love the book and can't so reading. Good luck author
This is so awesome. I don't thin I have encountered or read an Eastern Fantasy Genre before, but this is a good start. I love how the author made the characters as well as the story line. Kudos to you author!
This book is totally awesome. I enjoyed reading so far and I wanna go till the end. Good work author. Though it's a new genre but Loved your book.
This is so cool! I love how the author writes the story, I am not a fan of eastern fantasy but it did get my interest. I love how the author describe each character. Kudos to you! Keep it up![img=recommend]
I'm not sure I've come across Eastern fantasy before, but so far I'm liking this. I love the main character thoughts and the fluidity between all characters. How they all relate together in the novel. Looking forward to more characters.
The synopsis is really catchy. I love the way the Author write this story, it was unique and far from the common! Love how the describe the main chracters! Good job Author! Kudos!
From the first chapter, you feel the atmosphere of adventure, I love it, this story has a lot of potential! It's very exciting, I hope I can read more [img = recomendar]
Very interesting start to the story and very very unique writing style. The first chapter itself got me really intrigued. Amazing job author, please keep it up
Actually I love how the story has a unique great start. I love how the characters are being groomed. This will turn out into a great story, patiently waiting for the next update. Keep it up writer.