As multiple worlds and dimensions converged, humanity was met with the Unknown. In order to save himself and others, he must reach his full potential as the last hope.
He must become the last shining star that guides his people.
This is the story of a man's desperate attempts to save humanity from certain extinction, as well as find out who's behind it all. He dreams of creating a fairer, more just reality and through the System, finds a ray of hope. Come and follow his journey!
*While the story is fast-paced, it is also a slow-burn in terms of character building and development. Characterisation happens as the story unfolds and different plot points come into play. Beware if that's not your cup of tea.
Because if I don't support myself, I'm pretty sure nobody else will. Hope you guys enjoy my novel and give me honest feedback. Proper criticism is always welcome.
theres 2 books of this in the amazon bookstore if you want to skip waiting for single chapters. It's under kindle unlimited as well so if you got that you can read both without paying.
Ayer, your novel is great but it could sink a little more even if the work is very good, keep working to become famous and everyone can enjoy it. Arigato, Ayer.
Chamoy/EoTreecho (or by any name that you know me was here), also, its a nice novel ayer, so keep it up bro. Imagine if it turns in a mangá or even an anime if do you want, so don't give up and go to the end!
Really great novel highly recommended to people who loves adventure type novels!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Definitely a good read, everything is done pretty well. Though, I can't say too much about the plot since there are only roughly 20 chapters out at the moment. I may come back and edit this review once there are more out (>50?) Truly a gem though, great unique concept and lifelike characters. Keep it up.
The style is really unique. Liam is very relatable in the first few chapters. The author did a really great job describing things. Updates are going really great. Worldbuilding is amazing, everything is quite unexpected.
This story grapples your heart while the author slowly glues your eyes onto the screen with adhesive. I love every aspect of it! With every character introduced and world-brick laid, I feel my heart-rate pick up and almost lose my sense of direction. You transport me to your universe, author! I’m definitely going to keep up with this story.
Really a good read, the way Liam has been described, it's too good and story is quite interesting with the use of system. Looking forward for more
Yea this is definitely a novel I can get into. Liam is a character that is relatable and likable within the first couple chapter of the novel. The world building is creative and imaginative. I’ll definitely be adding this to my libary.
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The style is what I found quite interesting. The updates also seem pretty stable and the story development also interested me. I created an account just to review this tbh
Writing quality: Is pretty solid, few grammar mistakes, diverse and detailed descriptions. Stablity of updates: Not a chinese author that sold their soul to the devil and updates 14-28/week but a nice 5-7/weekly. Story development: Pretty nice as well, mc does have old 'tragic backstory' but it not copypasted like most transmigation novels and has ties to mc's "power" or something. Character design: Well, not much to say here... the feels tho man. World Background: Transmigation/different world so it's not exactly easy to imagine everything but it is pretty good. Overall: 4.8
Pretty good, though I can't be bothered to write an actual review -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Definitely recommended. Has a lot of potential, wonder where the author will take the story