An immortal hero MARVELXDC

this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

just read chapter 8 and I wish I had the words to describe the awesome story. I a. literally speechless because it is so good keep up the good work but don't overwork yourself pls🙏🙏🙏

I'm simply getting tired of the amount of rewriting that happened, This story was phenomenal in every rewrite it turns out great but then you will just repeat the same thing drop suddenly then just return with another rewrite and that also includes your other story in marvel which I wish that you don't drop, maybe your facing things in your life or you're a perfectionist that wants to make the best story but that doesn't;t happen by rewriting your story before finishing it. You should finish the story and then do it again with your new experience bye

[Detected Unique Skill] [Writers Grace] - [Evolution to Race: Half God] [Commencing] - [Finished] [Evolution to God Conditions] [Unique Skill]-[Peerless Actor] (Mission Set)

I had to delete a review I made at Chapter 11 just because of Chapter 13. The writing quality is ok with small errors in spelling and grammar. The updates as of this moment are often, though I am unaware of a set schedule. The story development starts off ok but the MC seems to devolve as the story progress. He gets extreme power growth at the cost of character growth??? The stories concept is good but the chapters feel forced after about 5, the author needs to slow down and plan their direction. The MC feels like an 18 year old that has been emotionally stunted at 10 years of age. The story describes events in his life that would most likely have helped him mature faster emotionally then stop so unaware of a reason for this. The other characters are so far basic with no standouts. The world is almost not described at all up to this point so it’s still up in the air. The story has a lot of potential, especially at the start, so the other should slow it down. Rewriting some chapters and planning more would help.

I see potential for the Story has a good start now we have to wait for how the story and the MC develops......................................

You should teally come back to this story it was a really good one also one of my favorites also u left us on a cliffhanger so dont make me threaten cliffhanger-kun to attack you plus who doesnt like an immortal anti-hero

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Most definitely an amazing read. I recommend it highly. I hope the author keeps writing this story and keeps putting out chapters.

This is new... I always hate the self-righteous mc that draws a line not to kill, I know it's wrong but not everything can be solved by being good, him being a necessary evil is great for me. Good luck author.