Peace offering to the cursed prince
"My dear if there has been any misunderstanding between us, I apologize but I have always wanted the best for you, that is why I seem a little difficult at times," Regina said smoothly. She knew that if Ellen continued to talk the king might find out about her pretentious behavior.
Ellen was rendered speechless by the queen's action. How could she continue complaining after the Queen apologized so smoothly? "Your highness, your craftiness is worthy of recognition" Ellen mentally praise the Queen.
On her dying bed, Queen Agatha made her husband king George promised to marry her best friend, Regina. She knew that the royal council will put him under pressure to marry a new wife since she was unable to give him a son.
She asked this of him because she felt her Regina will love and protect her daughter since they grew up like sisters.
The king fulfills his promises to his late wife and married Regina.
Queen Regina treat the little princess very well until she gave birth to a prince for the king. Once she felt her position as the queen was secured, she became vicious and maltreated Ellen.
Years went by and Ellen lived under the unfair treatment of her stepmother and her children. Her father no longer cared for her, it seem Regina had him wrapped around her finger.
When Ellen turned fifteen, war broke out between her kingdom and the kingdom of Avalo, The war lasted for three years, before the two kingdoms made a truce. Avalo demanded a marriage alliance to seal the truce. King George knew that his kingdom will lose if the war continues, he had no choice but to agree to their demands.
If it were to marry any other prince Queen Regina would have favored her daughter but considering that it was the crown prince of Avalo, who was known to be the cursed prince. Princess Ellen was a perfect peace offering.
How will Princess Ellen survive in a strange land, a kingdom where her husband is feared and hated by all his parents inclusive. How does the cursed prince treat her and why was he referred to as cursed?
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉 ADVICE I wanted to tell that few edits has to made. The typos not the grammar. You have fluid narration for me but the typos were the dilemma of its quality. Few edits has to be made for my advice. Capital letters, punctuations. Dialogues not starting with a capital letter and not ending with a comma or period. Welp, this is a wonderful story so I want it to be edited as I like it as a reader. It was normal to see these problems just when I started. But I overcome it, so you can do it too! 🙏 😉 Peace ✌️
I was recommended this story and in spite of a few chapters available, you will discover it's a lovely tale and the author has a strong narrator voice. It's easy to overlook some typos and immerse yourself in the introduction of a promising story. It starts with a princess having her destiny turned upside down by an arranged marriage! I'm curious to discover what is the prince's curse! It gets more interesting as the chapters go! Good luck author!
I loved the plot twist of this novel. It has unexpected storyline and characters. Definitely has huge potential for more exciting story along the way. I am waiting for the updates everyday.
This book has an interesting plotline. Though there are only few chapters when I'm reading this, I can already see a potentially big romance novel. There are still some spelling mistakes but with a general proof reading can rectify them. Overall, it's an excellent book with very immersive story.
This is my honest review, First Author your novel is a chefs kiss, it really interesting and has a unique plot, the story goes with flow and the description are wonderful. ( Don't mind me I just love the author whose description are clear) And tbou there were some grammatical and punctuation mistakes here and there. still no worries ( I do that too 😅) It will be better with time. And keep writing, your novel is just great!!
I mean what does this book not have? Intriguing characters, evil step-mother of the west. I know she liked the king before he died. No one can tell me she didn't. ANyways lovely writing. Can't wait for more.
You had me after I read the first chapter! I am NOT a fan of the step-monster. Her father is a wimp. And Princess Ellen is a hero! I'm looking forward to more chapters
This book is so interesting. I think I reviewed it once, here I am do so again. The book cover is enough to lure one to read this book and in the opening of this book has the diction right for this book. Great work author. Good work
I'm curious about what place this is set in. minus that small issue I like the story so far. the main character is a little too side line but with time it will change.
I am on chapter 333. I am enjoying the story and you will too if you can overlook the grammatical errors. Then again, they're not grammatical errors, the entirely wrong word is used. It's like the words were chosen based off of phonetics not meaning. You will have a gist of what the author is saying so you're able to follow along and keep reading. Despite that, I highly recommend reading this novel. You will not be disappointed .
I really loved this story. The characters and the storyline were excellent and well developed. I enjoyed the relationship between the main characters the most. The only thing that I would recommend is to have someone proofread the chapters. The grammar and spelling were often times frustrating and would take away from enjoying the story fully.
this is a cute story. A few tweaks on the baddie who's really a goodie and the poor gal sacrificed by her parents to become his wife. The problem is the writing: the translator cannot spell. hence there are traces instead of truces and the palaces have no servants but are teaming with savants, not to mention the princes who defile their parents rather than defy them. honestly, in two minutes an English speaker could turn this into a brilliant read. I'm only at ch 100 but I'll do it for free!
fl and ml both r amazing 😍 nice couple.... cunning nd have leadership qualities.... avalo live long ...[img=coins][img=fp] I also loved the character of sebastian's mom what a lady i would love to read a book about her nd prince edward love story ....
The story is very engaging and entertaining. I literally read through from chapter 1 to 270 in 3 days. If you can overlook the grammatical errors, this book is well worth the time.
A story of great potential. The first few chapters already introduced me to immersing content. The characters are well crafted and the pace is just great. Hoping for a good result for this book.