RWBY: Jaune Arc SI (Complete)
After a four fight losing streak a former college wrestling star gets cut from the UFC. Fortunately he doesn't have to go home and tell his family that he is officially cut because Forrest Griffin runs him over in his hurry to nab that sweet Toyo Tires exclusive parking spot. Instead of going home in shame, our hero reincarnates as Jaune Arc in RWBY. Not that you would know that from reading the fic as I skip strait to the start of canon.
That's right, no trite BS about being a full grown man in a baby's body. And no existential angst about the life he left behind or what happened to canon Jaune's soul. No anxiety attacks over how the world will be under attack from the Queen of Evil by the time he is a young man.
No wasted chapters wanking the MC off by having him write Harry Potter or Fifty Shades or any other ridiculous way to make money that would require a serious skill set or access to Wikipedia, this guy had to work at the local hardware store to afford the tools and materials needed to craft his huntsman equipment.
No goldfinger either. Just a guy dropped into a character that never reached his pinnacle because he started the show with absolutely zero knowledge of combat and fitness.
Anyway, our Jaune starts off ready to take the world of Remnant, but something keeps preventing him from stealing the shine off the main cast.
Very good history until now (Ch3) the grammar is great. Just saying although I don't like harems and I don't even know if you are going to do one, IF you do, please do not transform Jaune into a Pokemon trainer with a single-minded goal of getting them all. It's hard to make a good and believable harem but if you fo pull it off it WILL be great.
Great story in a familiar setting that comes with a MC who does not have any thing extra. This builds into a reasonable set of interactions good pacing with surprising and unexpected twists.
Loved it. Chad Jaune saikyou. Shame it wasn't longer. Some characters are different from cannon but it made the story much better in my opinion. Hopefully other readers will understand too.
Bruh How much until this fic gets an official review? Though to be fair Most of my attention was on The Grunt fic so
even after reading this like once every year it's been out I still love the absolute hell out of it
loved this story it's really compelling can't wait to read what comes next
This was an absolute delight to read. Couldn't put my phone down.
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Jaune SI does what he intends to and gets his happy ending despite the bumps.
I'mma also review this fic until it get an official 5/5 rating when you search for stories. Ma Boi you really have the worst luck when it comes to Readers
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Just for that description 10/10. make more words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words