Follow the epic adventure of Prince Julian to rebuild the kingdom of Maharlika and explore the myriad secret of Erda Terra.
In a world full of chaos and unknown things, Julian a young teen obtained the mysterious system and become the Reaper everyone feared. How much strength and courage you need to be the best? Explore the world of Erda Terra together with Julian.
"Sometimes the hardest battle is against yourself."
Massive battles, evolution, blades reaching to the peak; a legend of a young man becoming the Shadow Reaper on the battlefield has begun.
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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉 ADVICE Slight edits has to be made. But it is not disturbing to read though. Welp typos, if you know what I mean 😉
This story has a great start! I love the way you explained the plot and circumstances around the prince. Also love the synopsis. It is very smooth to read. Like it so far! Keep it up! I appreciate it!
A rather decent start to the story. I like the descriptions and easygoing writings. The author wrote the book with present tense, though I wouldn't suggest writing fantasy with the present tense. There's nice world-building, I can see there will a lot in the later chapters. now the problems apart from the punctuations, there's not much grammatical mistakes. It would take an hour to fix that so, work on it asap. And try not to use any passive voice when there's no need for it. Your character tones and dialogues are nice, but I recommend to improve it more. Overall its looking promising... I'm not just saying this for swapping, I mean it. Good luck author. I only read first few chapters, I'll read more when I have time.
The world background of this book is very interesting and it is regarding kingdom buliding, I love this setting. The plot moves slowly making it very immersive. About story, it is great and have very big potential. Hoping for more chapters!!!
This is one interesting novel I have fun reading! Welcome to Prince Julian's adventure in the land of magic, royalties, demons, knights and other supernatural beings. Each chapter is a page turner, exciting and entertaining. A novel filled with action, no boring moments! Good job, Author! Keep it up!