Fateless.

I like the way you introduced the characters and explained the world they live in indirectly it gave alot of information In way that wasn't boring, there's alot of room for growth for the characters and the story in general

" lease me with words of distraction and I'll explode but supply me me with the will to survive and watch the world grow" simply amazing. Bravo author.

Vol1 was good in the sense that it worked as a good entry to the story, gives you an idea of the world and so on and so forth. But Vol2 was better in every aspect and has one of my favorite chapters other than Act I. Part IV.

From the flow of the story to the expression of characters were truly flawless. This story is able to grab your attention just by the display of the first book, enough plot twists to keep you reading and detailed expression. This is amazing and it deserves to go far.

Yet another beautifully written chapter you never cease to amaze me. Can wait for YOUR next chapter so that I can see how things unfold from here

Ight so regarding the premise its really solid and can go places if handled well, also I like the fact that your giving little mysteries in the first volume that will act as a foundation to future events or plot twists. I also like the fact that your giving a considerable amount of lore to some of the characters so that at least we the readers would want to know more about the characters instead of flat plot devices. Overall I think the story has potential (again if handled well), I'm actually impressed by how much lore you've put behind the story which has me wanting to read more and know where the story will end up. Cool stuff bro better than the trash I've seen people make in my class😂 I'd give it a 4/5 so far👌🏾

The book is absolutely captivating with it's riveting emotional " keep you on the edge of your seat" vibe. This is definitely a "must read" book. Thumbs up for the good work.

The three chapters seem like introduction chapters and the way they've been done is quite well when it comes to the plot. The higlight for me is how it changes from narration to character pov's after the "experience". Although, would love the world to be described more. Looking forward to more.

The story is very descriptive and highly engaging. It really puts you into the story and makes you feel as if you are actually there. First chapter is already fun to read and a great introduction to the story. Not much of a reader but this is great🤙🏾

What I like about your book is the imagery, really u make it easy to picture the charactes and the emotion they they hold. It's also easy to sympathize with the characters like ryu and his friends. Thumbs up!fr

First off, the introduction and world building was solid. As the characters now deal with their situation, it's interesting to see how far their character is helpful in crisis and how long they will hold on to it. Really interesting is wether there are special abilities or not for the protagonists.

The potential for this book is amazing seeing how the author has intricately arranged the tiny mysteries and dialogue. Can't wait to see the second volume.

This book has a brilliant story. It's really captivating and you wouldn't want to put down the book once you start reading it! Do check it out!

Absolutely fabulous writing. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.i urge to continue writing more entertaining chapters for my sake 😂