The Break In
Author: Deeva_Giri
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The novel is about a teenager called Aidy who once breaks into a house to steal a ring but it turned out that the ring was already stolen. He gets caught by the owner of the house. Feeling guilty Aidy starts searching for the robber. That isn't it Aidy's adventures are never ending so read the story to find out Aidy's adventures. This is a novel for all age groups especially teenagers. I hope the readers of my novel will like it.
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DA new thing so cool i lov it can i contribute in someway i really love ur work and how interesting it is it says no enough reviews so ima post everyday!!
my god the story became so guddd i love this story i hope i get to see u win da competiotion pls make more chapters love the work yeyeyeyeyeyeyey
Love this story who doesnt like a mysterious and magical story i love this story i hope i can get more chapters from this story not only that this novel has been very good from 4.2 k too 30.2k
Very interesting novel. You know how to play with words perfectly. It is the mixture of many interesting books that makes it intriguing. Couple of feedbacks, describe the incidents slowly and nicely also use some interesting words. Most of the words in the novel are very simple that opens the mystery quickly.
It's a great story. Very eager to know who the thief is. One feedback: If the incidents were decribed in brief this story would touch the sky.
It is an amazing story. One feedback: If the flow of the story would have been a little slow and if the incidents would be described in brief the story would be so much better than it is.
Great story! Love it! The story has a great theme and new twists are very interesting. The story's character design is amazing. Waiting for the next chapters.
Amzing story! It is very intriguing. I like the theme of the story and also its flow. The best part of it is that it is not complicated. Eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters!!!