The Dream Saga

I enjoyed the story, well done author! Character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes. Keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 100 chapters!

Intresting Plot and good writing style. Definitely worth the time and money you would spend here. [img=faceslap][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp]

The idea behind this story is pretty cool and the concept behind it is really good. It reminds me of those types of stories where the main character has to go through all of these challenges to improve himself. This book has a great background behind it, the worldbuilding is really good, the main character is likable, and the character development is great. I think it's a pretty good book, and I think the story will get better if the author adds more chapters and updates.

It is such an interesting concept and you also have a good start. I think it will be much better if you edit it a bit to correct some grammar and punctuations. Keep up the good work, author!

Dang this story is interesting. It has it's own cool plot and isn't following any trope. the author's choices of words are amazing which makes you want to continue to read the story. I loved it and I hope the author can keep up the hard work.

well , at first the novel seems like a Thriller but as you advance you'll turn more into its fantasy side the story seems to hide many secrets and mysteries and they concept of not one or two but a million worlds is unique and will always have something interesting to represent

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From the very start the tension in the atmosphere could be felt by the well articulated thought of character. The scenes and actions depicted by the author are quite captivating. The more I read the more I felt more engaged with the main character himself. Good potential... Looking forward to read more.

This is a really good story that can be updated more frequently, your writing is elusive yet interesting, I will be sure to continue reading it. It has a lot of potential and I hope you do it justice. It would be easier to introduce any factions or armies later so you will have more potential to come out of writer block. Just update more frequently and you'll be good to go.

Great story. I specifically liked the world background, the world process really showed the efforts behind them. Character have layers, story development so far is fine. Rather than transmigrating in one fantasy world merging many is a great idea and keep the plot from getting boring. Best of luck author great idea.

First time a i seen a novel like this one and I’m impressed how you made everything work. I cant wait to see more only negative would be the pacing the chapters where pretty long 😅.

The concept of your story is fresh as the world background is quite interesting with the different countries and creatures. The sentences can be shorter as writing long sentences make it confusing.The character background is quite good but I hope more information is given as the story progresses!Overall great story:)

Seems good to me with the raw chapters. I can see its potential and so far so good. This needs edits in some parts as I have commented. Looks like it will be an awesome read if you will edits it. It will be perfecto! Cheers! For the future!

To all the reviewers , this is editor of the novel. Plz let me know if there are any mistakes in latest chapters. We'll try to fix as fast as we can, to give y'all error less work .