Devil Fruit in Marvel.

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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆○○○ - bad translation or just one of those weird ffs. (ex. rather than "string" he use "line") ▪︎Story Development........☆○○○○ - boring (well this is not your original work. so even if I review this ff there will be no improvements. the only improvement that you can do is translation but the story.....nay) ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆○○○ - boring mc. - Physical design..... I dount get it. ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ - well its translated ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆○○ ▪︎ Overall..........................《2.6》

what's next will the author reval that the eternals where Chinese ''we watched tye stupid Americans die because of the Japanese we didn't interfere with you people but now (mc) lin fan showed that China is the strongest country'' communist is the way

Trash don't read this and its highly offensive not gonna lie bad translation and racism to the max he is not joking about it either. Not something i would recommend to read you can get lost quite quickly.

Don't waste your time reading this. It's a Joke of a story First the Grammar is Horrible cause it's a Translation, Second Typical CN Novel Nonsense honestly if you think CN novels are trash don't waste your time.

Pure racism even if its computer translated! the story shouldnt even be translated at all, just keep it in china

It's a translation work that changes many names from People or location to Chinese names, which is very confusing and infuriating because a quick google search and all problems are solved. I don't know if he's racist or his humor is just weird, because he gets mugged and told them he hates discrimination and black Ghosts to let you know the thieves are black. The whole Fanfic is just very weird, and I only read until chapter 6 or so. So please make yourself a picture and read it for a bit. Have a great day

I'm only giving it a 2.2 because it is so bad it's hilarious. It's way over the top with racism and overall not something that should've been translated. Talking about 'typical black people' and 'yellow monkeys'. I don't know why the translator decided to do this one but hey man, you do you. If you are reading the reviews before the book, then don't read this pile of trash.

Best marvel fic, zero racism and finally a mc that can think with his brain.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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ThIs story is trash. first of all this story has poor quality writing (which i can mostly overlook) Second of all this story is racist (which i can also overlook even though i am black and some of the chapters kinda perturbed me) BUT WHAT I CANT FORGIVE IS THE FACT THAT THIS HAS (“EVILPROTAGONIST”) as a tag and he does nothing evil besides Being in a poor quality novel and being racist from time to time do not recommend and im disappointed in this supposedly “evilprotag” novel.

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Well, I like it. The Story is nice. MC's character is also to my liking. I hope that you can post more such novels. This one can almost be compared with holy joker novels. Great Choice. Thnx- There has never been an insurmountable peak in the world, and there is no invincible person. The only thing that can defeat us is ourselves. Only the weak will fear the strength of others, The strong will only move towards the peak, step by step, no matter what others are doing. ---------------Great. :D

i hate this kind of toxic stuff in your novel you so racist againt black people's and african peoples you could say body guard or gangs but you always say black people's black people's you could have named them you just turn a good novel to a disgusting novel i hope you open your eyes and start give respect and if you are just translating this then please remove the racist part it almost make me puke from disgust