DxD: Primordial Chaos

There is no difficulty in the achievements, the protagonist has it easy, he gives things away, nothing progresses, characters are added, it is interesting how you put characters but honestly there is no progress, and you make his life easy, you give things without reason (it would have been better If you had gone on missions to another world and each member receives gifts for finishing world missions depending on their contribution, but you give them why they feel sorry, meh). - It still has errors, but since there is nothing to read, I will keep reading to pass the time.

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O começo estava interessante,mais com a rapidez do mc se corromper foi assustadora,essa fic tinha um potencial bruto mas acabou me decepcionando.

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the author in chapter 15-16 just did an atrocity i didnt expect it went from 0 to 100 very fast

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The wording is terrible and hard to follow. The character and hus power is not thought out. The author did not even follow what he made the R.O.B. say no op powers, then made him a primordal.

Put more Chapter ++++++

Look at his wishes and you'll understand why I rated 1 star. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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I thought that it's an update ,but it's not good thing author change that cancer. And this one is much better . Although there's a grammatical errors, and typos but compare to your first book you made a progress so 5 star for me.

Oh Author deleted the first one, and it's not being spoon feed by a goddess anymore GOOD VERY GOOD I LOVE THIS !! I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE COMPARE TO OTHER ONE BEFORE YOU CHANGE IT ALTHOUGH IT'S OVERPOWERED ATLEAST IT'S NOT A SPOON FEED ONE

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