Born in a Crossover between Percy Jackson, Harry Potter and the DC Comics, the only way for him to survive and get on top is to take advantage of who he is and the inheritance Ihe received from his father.
He's Zachary Alexander Jackson, and this is his journey to the top.
pretty good so far, I'd recommend you to not make him a jack of all trades unless you want him to be op, since you're going for Hercules you could make him incredibly strong and very skilled in combat but I don't think you should make him perfect, reading about an overpowered, flawless mc with no weaknesses gets boring pretty quickly
The heaven did I just try to read ??!!??
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So far, everything is going swimmingly. I believe you should give MC something akin to Spartans Rage, as well as one of Kratos' weapons like the Blades of Chaos or the Leviathon axe. It would aid him to go Kratos on Hades.
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