During the Second World War, Kyle looked at Captain America standing straight and proud before him. Suddenly, a series of skill cards appeared.
「Pistol Master」
「Martial Arts Master」
「Shield Defense Master」
「Super Soldier Serum」
Which skill card do you wish to extract?
“Wait… what? This golden finger… you must be pulling my leg! Not only skill cards but I can also extract super-powered skills like the Super Soldier Serum? Mother of God… what is this?!”
(Hey Guys, I am retranslating this novel here and I will try to quickly reach the chapters that had been already translated on other websites. For everyone's confirmation, I am translating it with my own efforts and I am not copying it from other websites. So give me your reviews and tell me if you like it)
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Summary in gif. This has been posted so many times and yeah I read it every time because it's worth it (that and i have terrible memory). So please finish it.
I fail to understand the lack of negative comments for this fanfic. I decided to stop reading on chapter 49. I am fine with having an mc who is cold and calculating, wanting to adhere to the original plot and intentionally steering events that way. I am also fine with an mc who could not do as he liked due to having insufficient ability. What I am not fine with is an 'intelligent' and 'overpowered' mc with about a dozen abilities to do what he wants who fails to do it because he was 'helpless' in the face of circumstances. The Author is simply forcing the plot by nerfing the mc drastically in those few chapters. The nerfing is both ability wise and intelligence wise. Anyone who has read up to chapter 49 will understand what I mean. Those few chapters were just plain stupid and insulting to my intelligence. This story had so much potential. Sad to see it go this way.
For me as long as the translation is good I'll be happy
I had tried to read the previous translation of this novel but.. yeah it wasn't that good, but now its really good. I know its already written even before 2021 so I won't try to make some absurd request for future chapters just hope it will be good.W.Q: Good S.D: Many things are gonna change but hope he is able to extract high IQ and other things from people like Howard stark and others.C.D: So far so good.U.S: 14chapters per day it is now.W.B: Marvel universe is always filled with mysteries and we don't know which universe this is so 4stars for current world setting.27-06-2023[42 chapters uploaded]
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wishing you all the best with the retranslation. You are doing a good work and I hope you make this wonderful story more legible.
The traduction is good (writing quality and update stability) but while slightly different the mc's power and the plot are quasi identique to an other FF I read. different name for MC because the traductor choose an other one. but is't basically ''let me copy your homework please, I will change a little it so it's ok.'' waste of my time.
the mc is so ungrateful lol the more powerful he gets the more he only cares about his girls, he dont event care about the fallin Asgard, bro is appointed as the guardian of asgard like heimdall got artifacts and powers from it and says "this is not my responsibility" the card thing is also will only be useful when he is in danger, he wont even scheme how to get the cards in powerful being in the later stage, there are also many usefull cards that were not used lol, another thing about the cards is he cant even get every card there is, "it says can't extract because the power is not perfect" then later chaps the power who holds that card became super powerful. lastly the plot became boring, bro is nowhere when there is big event happening like lol he won't even care to solve the problem even he knew the solution, he always blurt that he has a plan then proceeds to reason with bullshits making him like a schemer for like whatever the author wants, his not commitee to his own personality lol
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dropped chapter 58 I can accept alot due to it being fan fic. of marvel but then having black widow appear, during ww2 just ruins any form of immersion
if was a servicable novel until MC loses the time stone, then the story and narrator just out fight lies and lores rewritten, plotholes and plot traps galore to milk more content becomes frequent. letting enemies go, planting scenarios where ppl just keeps getting lost or detained instead of preps and real thoughts towards the original plot. its fairly terrible writing but whatever real ideas that werent blatantly plaigarized is decent although unconvincing. extremely inefficient.
One of the best fanfics to ever exist in my opinion. I won't explain the reason, but It's for yours to taste. I am not being biased, but reading these reviews often mislead people. Everyone has individual liking and that is what differentiates us. But before leaving, give it a chance.
This have great potential and i enjoy many part of this story but I don't undetstand mc obsession with creating a "family" power based. WHY? He could go for any kind of organization structure but why is he so fixated on this one particular bloodline group family type structure?