As custom, authors shameless self review here. But yeah as the summary says, I write in my downtime. Updates to ANY of my books are sporadic, it's not like I can make a living off of this anytime soon.
I'm just currently inspired with writing this particular story at the moment.
Anyways, don't be afraid to leave a comment and review my works. Please. Constructive feedback is always welcome
Enjoy ✌🏾
3 years ago
7
Leylin_Farlier99
This is a hidden gem. The author has described sasuke's character properly and the grammer is also good. sasuke is actually thinking logically and using all the resources he has to his disposal properly.
He could easily beat cannon zuko and given 8 more years even avatar would not be able to defeat him. Keep going Author San this book has so much potential that it is a bit vexing that you update slowly.
3 years ago
6
Gacha123
This is a good avatar fanfic. It started with Sasuke killing himself in the process of Uchiha Massacre in front of Itachi then he got reincarnated as the first grandchild of Azulan. He showed a great talent as a firebender and hailed as a prodigy.
This story has a nice pace and development, however since its only a few chapters yet i don't know what's gonna happen.
Just give it a try if you like Avatar fanfic, it's Sasuke so expect him to be edgy, but maybe there will be development in the future.
3 years ago
10
God_of_Perverts
Sasuke kills himself before he becomes and emo duck butt. Enough said.
3 years ago
6
Towery
A avatar last airbender fanfic featuring sasuke with his firebending skill. It's good give it a try. It's good give it a try. It's good give it a try.
3 years ago
6
Frona_Gorgophone
Author you got a flying colors from me for your story. You really know the how the characters from canon behave, even to the point that you get Sasuke's edginess spot on. And, sadly that's also your flaw. Your MC himself is flawed. Though, you don't have to feel down, as it's only my subjective view.
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Need more Sasugay!
3 years ago
2
Ezzaldien_s
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3 years ago
2
DetachedDreamer
I liked the origin story but the Mc doesn't act a way a child eho died reincarnated act. he'd have loved his second family and got just as attached, yet its not true here. He's more decisive than any child would ever be in two lives. Its just over the top and the story seems a bit confusing and its progress doesn't feel smooth. It isn't a bad story tho.
2 years ago
1
Moses_
Amazing story , hopefully it continues 😍😍😍😍😍
2 years ago
1
The_Burger_King
I agree with the other reviews this is a hidden gem and deserves more love
3 years ago
1
Samuel812753
really amazing novel be nice if he accepted his new family though and moved on. or else it become something that'll hold him back and prevent him from getting stronger by Becaming a bug knot in his heart
3 years ago
1
Theadesy22
so far so good
3 years ago
1
Towery
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As custom, authors shameless self review here. But yeah as the summary says, I write in my downtime. Updates to ANY of my books are sporadic, it's not like I can make a living off of this anytime soon. I'm just currently inspired with writing this particular story at the moment. Anyways, don't be afraid to leave a comment and review my works. Please. Constructive feedback is always welcome Enjoy ✌🏾
This is a hidden gem. The author has described sasuke's character properly and the grammer is also good. sasuke is actually thinking logically and using all the resources he has to his disposal properly. He could easily beat cannon zuko and given 8 more years even avatar would not be able to defeat him. Keep going Author San this book has so much potential that it is a bit vexing that you update slowly.
This is a good avatar fanfic. It started with Sasuke killing himself in the process of Uchiha Massacre in front of Itachi then he got reincarnated as the first grandchild of Azulan. He showed a great talent as a firebender and hailed as a prodigy. This story has a nice pace and development, however since its only a few chapters yet i don't know what's gonna happen. Just give it a try if you like Avatar fanfic, it's Sasuke so expect him to be edgy, but maybe there will be development in the future.
Sasuke kills himself before he becomes and emo duck butt. Enough said.
A avatar last airbender fanfic featuring sasuke with his firebending skill. It's good give it a try. It's good give it a try. It's good give it a try.
Author you got a flying colors from me for your story. You really know the how the characters from canon behave, even to the point that you get Sasuke's edginess spot on. And, sadly that's also your flaw. Your MC himself is flawed. Though, you don't have to feel down, as it's only my subjective view.
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I liked the origin story but the Mc doesn't act a way a child eho died reincarnated act. he'd have loved his second family and got just as attached, yet its not true here. He's more decisive than any child would ever be in two lives. Its just over the top and the story seems a bit confusing and its progress doesn't feel smooth. It isn't a bad story tho.
Amazing story , hopefully it continues 😍😍😍😍😍
I agree with the other reviews this is a hidden gem and deserves more love
really amazing novel be nice if he accepted his new family though and moved on. or else it become something that'll hold him back and prevent him from getting stronger by Becaming a bug knot in his heart
so far so good
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