Forging a Path Ahead
No one can choose how he/she is born, but what we do with our time in between our birth and death decides who we are. That time is already restricted or enriched by those we are forced to accept as family, those we accept and welcome in our family and those who have made it their business to disrupt our family.
This is a story of a small boy, lost in his own little corner of the world, desperately trying to keep his family in one piece. And maybe during the struggle he will gain something he would have never thought possible, for in this world, nothing ever happens as you expect it to in this world.
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The 2nd sentence starts off on the first line and ends on the ninth.. Its full of rambling sentences and incoherent ideas that spill into each other. I cant compell myself to read past chapter 2 or find any interest in the info dumping about an inbred child. I think the overall topic for the story wasn't well thought out either probably the reason why this beginner attempt at a novel was dropped.