A.U. of the Twilight series. Thomas Raizel is the broken, adopted brother/cousin of Bella Swan who joins her on her trip to Forks. Edythe Cullen is the twin sister of Edward Cullen and used to having everything she wants with but a few words. Leah Clearwater is the first ever female shifter of her Tribe, or is she? Can Forks contain all that is coming to it?
Writing quality is good, the dialogue is smooth and the mc is chill. The blushing thing is weird but might just be a translation error or a quirk
Bro so good hurry up and make more. Ready to see what’s up w dude already
A very good story, told slowly, building the characters without rushing in a balanced and pleasant way, I'm really surprised to find something so good with a Twilight theme. Congratulations to the Author and please keep writing, don't disappear, if you stop writing, please let me know.
Updates about every 2 days Good quality writing and besides misspelling Emmett’s name, there’s not much to say about the grammar The story’s pace is good and steady. Character personalities and interactions seem realistic for the world setting and doesn’t cause any confusion or wtf moments. World setting is Twilight so not much detail there since it’s already been established by the original book, except for the jabs at the school and crime in Phoenix, Arizona. All in all a great story. Hope it doesn’t fall to the curse of good Twilight fanfics. (The curse is that all the good Twilight Fanfics with potential for greatness are dropped suddenly with no warning at around chapter 40) I’ll be rooting for you, Author. Keep it up. Also, we need more chapters.
The characters are well developed.The storyline is epic and overall well written. The only thing lacking is the number of chapters other than that its a great read.
Really nice im just waiting for more chapters. And i hope author doesn't drop cuz most good twilight fanfics get dropped mid story soo u better not drop or
Very good novel, keep up the good work and please don't drop 🙏 👍 😀
Really good so far, keep it up. ...........................................................................................................................