A.U. of the Twilight series. Thomas Raizel is the broken, adopted brother/cousin of Bella Swan who joins her on her trip to Forks. Edythe Cullen is the twin sister of Edward Cullen and used to having everything she wants with but a few words. Leah Clearwater is the first ever female shifter of her Tribe, or is she? Can Forks contain all that is coming to it?
Writing quality is good, the dialogue is smooth and the mc is chill. The blushing thing is weird but might just be a translation error or a quirk
Really nice im just waiting for more chapters. And i hope author doesn't drop cuz most good twilight fanfics get dropped mid story soo u better not drop or
A very good story, told slowly, building the characters without rushing in a balanced and pleasant way, I'm really surprised to find something so good with a Twilight theme. Congratulations to the Author and please keep writing, don't disappear, if you stop writing, please let me know.
Bro so good hurry up and make more. Ready to see what’s up w dude already
The storyline keeps getting better ..........................................................................................................................
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👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Great just don't drop
I just finished the last chapter, and I can say the story has lots of potential. It just needs some work with the writing, but I can say for a fact it's improving and getting better. So I'm looking forward to the future
This is a good story told very well.. The slow pace, the character building and the world building is immaculate. I love this. Very few twilight fanfics to go around. And this takes the jewel. With an original character, with some original folklores and these new but exciting relationships that seemed to match the canon so effortlessly. Very well done, ser author. TYFC.
the story is quite nice, but the updating frequency does not quite match the novel's pace.
its a good story Mr. Author. I wanted his pairing with alice but this too is a nice change of pace. Also will he turn into a vamp anytime? If no then what about his lifespan being vastly shorter than vamp? I just started reading it but i wanted to know just for my peace of mind
sigue asi este sea convertido en uno de mis favoritos
Man I hope u don't drop this the best fanfic I read so far it has a nice story developed its fun to read u don't get bored I need at least 500chaps man.
Extremely well written a good balance with character personality not fast paced but not super slow either i binge read what was available in one sitting so it is good enough to pull you in
Really good Twilight fanfic to sit back and enjoy. Nice twists so far, new flavor for a shifter, hopefully it keeps on going.