Warm welcome to all on book
This story about a girl who are with her two child.. and brothers..and friends.. who are doing good now..
Expect them she has few more people also..also lost few of them that left her broken totally..vanished from some people life do not wanna see them again..
And struck in her past life which is only going to give her pain..so she avoids coming in front of them..
She lost her hope to live but loved her brothers and her Children's..
She got heart wrenching from the one who she gave her heart to that person..in return got nothing..
She gave something which no one can do..
Lets see how is she is doing in her life to come over of this all..
Will she able to meet that person who took her heart..
Or will she able to get that person back in her life..
Will able to face the some of them whom she avoiding in her life to see them again..
Will she can over come her past and stand as raw to face it all..
Or will her children accept the truth in their life..stay with her..
Stay on this story to more..about her..
The plot line is good but the book needs some editing. You tend to use a lot of '...' in between sentences making it hard to read. It disturbs the flow of reading. You also need to pay attention to the beginning of a conversation. Maybe reading a lot of other books would help you get the idea. Good luck, Author!
The story surely has a good plot, but there are noticeable grammatical problems and punctuation errors along with capitalization problems. I think you need to proofread the story. Good luck!