AEGIS

The dial is put to a 100 and doesn't go down for a moment! Lots of action, lots of things going on. The world lore is interesting and not too difficult to grasp. The only downside is that with so many things happening the actual event taking place get muddled in all the witty back anf forths between the character. A good story! Keep going!

I think it's well-written and some of the low reviews entirely based themselves on grammar issues and such, which were actually not that present. This is the author's first book and the issues that I have seen will be improved through more writing and otherwise, the story is interesting and worth a read, the writing can use some improvement but I think the author already has good descriptive ability. Give it a read, everyone! Keep it up :)

The author's love and passion for their craft had me hungrily reading their work. With the highlight of their skill being in openings and closings of their chapters, each segment is happily wrapped up to ensure even the angstiest of times are fulfilling. Write on!

The author has an amazing storyline here and your writing style is good. I didn't find any grammar issues and it didn't disrupt my flow in reading. You have done an amazing job here! Kudos to you. Hoping to read more!! Good work, Author!!

This is dope! Author you're doing a very good job! The story is great and for it being your first story, I give you a thumbs up 👍 Good job. Reginald is a character! He is all in one comedy 😂 the Action scenes got me going. Keep it up Author 👍

I think that the book Is written in a descriptive manner but it is also able to pull you in and keep u interested sure there are some mistakes but the overall story makes you overlook that great story

I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

inspired by tomb raider king? Because the concepts of Relics, bringin ppl together after the calamity really seems similar. #IMPORTANT I havent read the novel yet so idk what happens in it

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I haven’t read a lot of chapters yet however, if you hate fillers and slightly bad grammar and you are burnt out don’t read this book. If you have patience and love the concept of the book read.

I really enjoyed the first chapter. Your writing style is amazing with few to no noticeable errors. I must say, the power of the relics are quite dangerous from what I read so far😫 Anyway, keep up the great work and I'll be keeping an eye on this story to see how it goes [img=recommend]

As your first novel, it was very well written, the pace was okay , not too fast, i got hooked from the very first chapter, cant wait for more from you

A really interesting idea, which has a powerful start with the colorful image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters and the novel becomes more and more interesting through those words written.

The story has potential. I have to say that the description is really amazing. I mean, it's not too much, and not too less, just enough, just the way it should be. Good work!