S for Sign-in

bro this is so confusing the whole thing went 1-100 in just 3 chapter this isn't a slice of life fanfic it's a slice of revenge ok It started go mc has a farming sign in system mc meets a stranded girl gets married girl gets pregnant but is then kill mc swore revenge and the farming system which has given his nothing but farming knowledge start giving him something useful then the mc starts a massacre every one is getting kill bro this is not slice of life take that tag down its confusing the grammar is some what bad but imma give 5 stars cause creation is hard

Writing Quality 1*- Not much to say the grammar is terrible and the writing style ain't too good the dialogue is also forced and unnatural. Story Development 2*- The development is way too forced just read the first two chapters and you'll see. Character Design 1*- The characters are totally one dimensional and seem so fake. Updating Stability 3*- It's a new novel so there's a good amount of chapters to read at the moment. World Background 1*- Here the author tried but it kinda backfired by making the lack of world development noticable. Tips to the author: Read some professional novels with lots of dialogue so you can improve, invest in grammarly; if you can't afford it download a modded/hacked APK. Your writing skills as they are need a lot of improvement before I'd consider it readable (though that's me personally) I must however confess that the idea/premise although common is still interesting it's just the quality that needs improvement.

I was writing the Draculonium novel, but I wanted to have a clean plotline in that. But no new inspiration, I decided to write this novel first. Then focus on the Draculonium novel. For V for Vampire, its plot was confusing for many. While the chapter only more than 1000 words. Now for this, I have words between 1500 -2000. Even above once. My grammar will be a problem. But it will make you understand the plot. I will not say directly but in a twisted way. I only mention the farming sign-in system because it only gave him farming knowledge during that time. I never officially named the system in the novel. Support my novel.

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iam not even reading chapter 1, i just wana give all this author work 1*, why? well bcuz iam acidentaly readiing this imbecil author profil due to some dumb review this dumbas made on some books