To Prove Oneself
Kurtis hates his life, Being 15yrs old he is a victim of endless ,merciless bullying at school. Day in day out he is bullied, having to endure anything ranging from insults to damage of his belongings, being beaten up and constantly spat at. There is only so much a boy of his age can take. Then a day comes when he makes a mistake he both regrets and is forever grateful he made. Resulting in his unfortunate death....
Many struggles and sufferings as well as rewards await him. Read and watch as his goals and aspirations change as well as his personality shaped and sculpted by his environment and the people he meets. Old enemies persist and new ones surface.
Follow him as he makes shocking discoveries as well as a name for himself as he uncovers the mysterious and hidden truths of his new world filled with Magic and wonders.
This is my First time writing a story. If there are any discrepancies you notice, please comment them and I will do my best to fix it. Thankyou
If you see any similarities between my story with Supreme magus and My vampire System its because I took a lot of inspiration from both these great stories.
The First few chapters are about the MC's life before death leading up to his reincarnation. The reason I did not put them in an auxiliary volume is because It is important to the story. If you don't want to read it skip to chapter 8.
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This story has incredible potential, the detail in the description of important characters ,the excellent quality of characters and the appropriate use of punctuation. All this makes me want to read more, keep relaxing chapters and this could easily win the competition.
fire story bro. keep it up. it was very detailed and shows promise [img=recommend]. I love Kurtis' mum and I look forward to seeing Kurtis' development.
Ofc I'm going to give myself a Good rating. Hope you all enjoy this novel. I'm going to do my best to release at least two chapters a day. If I don't I'm warning you in advance that its because I'm still going to school and have school work to do. Enjoy
Very Good. The only problem I have are the slow releases. I undersits a slow process but we need knew chapters more often or readers will begin to lose interest and will move on. Overall really good story so far and great characterisation and motivation.
This story gets better with every chapter. I know he is going to die and be reincarnated soon but what I'm most confused about is his mum. You went as far as describing her as a beautiful, caring mother and making her a key character but he's just gonna die and leave her behind?
I. Love .It. This is my kinda book, I can't wait for the bullies to get what they deserve and for the reincarnation. The MC deserves better.
Its really good. Keep it up, the only problem is that you seem to repeat some of your words from time to time, other than that, the story is flowing fine.
I really enjoyed what I have read so far, this story shows promise and I hope it can carry on. Can't wait to see the bullies get what they deserve and I hope its bad.
Thus is very good so far, there is perfect character description, motives and background. The story is moving along at a Good pace and I can sense that we are getting closer and closer to the climax of this story. Over all really good but we need more chapters. Very Good so far though