The Queen Of Shadows
“Write 600 lines for me as your punishment.” He spoke without looking at her. He was looking at his book like her business doesn’t even concern him.
“Ugh, your boring you know...” She complained, rolling her eyes at the cold guy. It wasn’t her first time in his office but it feels like he is purposely picking on her and only her.
“Hey wanna hangout later at the mall with me?” She stood up from her seat, walking towards his table while looking at him with her warm smile. Using his magic, he teleported her back to her seat, without giving a reply.
"Don't ignore me~!" She stood up again and went towards him, with her hands on her table. Without any hesitation, he placed rings around her body, preventing her from moving about and placed her back at where she should be at.
"Hmph, meanie..."
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“Vivian, I’m sorry...”
“What for?”
“I believe that you weren’t the one who did those horrible stuff, you wouldn’t kill Mrs Gale and Mr Gale at all! I’m so sorry for not trusting you sooner...”
“It’s okay, I forgive you~!” Vivian hugged Jennie, feeling glad to know that she was there for her when she needed her and even believed her.
“Here...I brought some candy, want one?” Jennie handed Vivian a chewy sweet and she ate it but after some while of chewing the candy, she spat out blood from her mouth and fell to the floor...
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Meet Gavin Reinhardt, a cold, unemotional, strict, and scary yet popular werewolf of the school. He was a high ranked werewolf that was in the golden rank out of all, making everyone fear him because of his powers, except for one...
and there’s Vivian Flores, a kind, outgoing and caring normal looking girl and she was a bronze ranked rabbit. Yes, she belongs to the rabbit species...that's why she doesn't really have any friend except Jennie, right? She had magic too but she doesn’t uses it unless needed to...
Will there be any secrets to be discovered? Will death be awaiting in the end...? Read as mystery’s starts to slowly unveil as she carries on her life...and maybe even finding love on the way~
*Note* : The photo isn’t mine, so credits to the original artist of it!!
I feel the cover of this book does a really big disservice to the content in the book. I thought it was a romance novel mostly based on Victorian era due to it and as I started reading I found that it was not the case and I am sooooo glad about it!! I really liked the introductory chapter, it does a good job of setting up the story and I really liked the way it's written. I didn't really find anything to criticize about, and that's a great thing. I really liked the dialogues and characters. I will be waiting on the upcoming chapters :)
Given that some romance novels on this site can be bland and a little unrealistic, this novel is actually quite refreshing! It's clear the author knows where they want to take the story and I'm excited to see how it all evovles! Definitely give it a try!
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This book is quite interesting if you're into vampires and werewolves. Review Proper after reading the latest chapter 8 release... Writing Quality. The narratives are easy to read and fun. Though, I advise that you could use some more proofreading of your work to make it better. Stability of Updates. Just take your time honing this. Quality over quantity. Story Development. It's pretty well. As you continue to read, there are more interesting you get to learn in the story. Vampires, Werewolves, magic, academy and so much more. Character Design. I enjoy Vivian's persona but sometimes though maybe it's just me. Sometimes I felt her attitude was quite unnatural towards Gavin. Or maybe it's just her thing to get to act close with people because of her carefree nature? Oh, but I love the mysterious air surrounding her. And the puppy too! Well, this is just still starting and everything can still be developed and fleshed out. World Background. Well, actually I thought this would be an old era setup, but I'm surprised to see that is in the modern day. So much to explore and fleshed out more. Overall, this story has lots of potentials. With more development, this story can give us greater experiences 🙏🥰😌
I didn't get to read as much as I wanted to, but I will definitely be back to read some more! So far this book is really good! there characters are really well written with funny and relatable personalities! And the magic in the world is really intriguing! I can't wait to read more and learn more about what is going on in the story! I wish I had some power stones because I would send you some!
Great story. The story revolves around a girl name Vivian and her cold emotionless love interest in a romance fantasy setting while her friend Jeannie pokes her nose in plot every now and then. The setting of the story is like olympics were bronze,silver, gold category exists. Vivian being in the bronze category rabbit species is indifferent toward the power struggle in the academy while the Gavin is on the top of the food chain being a gold level werewolf. The story shows there journey of love while revolving around the academy of the strongest which is build upon the dead bodies of dead vampires after the war with werewolfs. Writing Quality - Good, you should mention who is talking sometimes it gets confusing. Story development - Steady, Not to fast nor to slow it's perfect from my perspective. Character design - I loved that Vivian is indifferent cause it's realistic this way. We normal people don't really care about the struggle on the top making her feel closer. I am a bit sceptical about Gavin though but I confident he will win me over with time. Story background - It might represents the harry potter style with all the categories and species but with romance as it's priority. (I might not be right only author can say for sure) Will I recommend this book? I will if you are a teenage girl like me looking for a romance fantasy story this might be one for you. (fun fact - Top ten fantasies women have about men consists of were wolfs, vampire, pirates, surgeons. Do you see two in this series?)
Writing this review 5 chapters in: Vivian's carefree and vibrant character comes across well in the text. The academy setting with its ranking system is a nice touch too. It would be cool to follow the characters as they grow and level up. Gavin is a bit of a blank at the moment -will read on to see how he grows. The writer seems like she's having fun writing - and it comes across in the text :) There are some grammar and spelling errors, but these can be easily remedied with a free app like Grammarly. :) There were some very long sentences in the first chapter - which got slightly confusing - but this improved in the next few chapters, making the story flow better! One suggestion is to communicate the world's background information (ie. like how the ranking system works) through the form of dialogue, instead of doing an info dump in a few paragraphs. It could make the story flow more naturally. Just a suggestion! Keep writing! Am looking forward to seeing how the plot develops. [img=recommend]
The story is very well written. It's easy to loose track of the main object, or over do descriptions, set contradictory character settings in novels that use paranormal setting. However, the author passes them all with panache. Try the story. You just might like it.
I am not a fan of romance novels but the vampire and werewolf elements added in the mix kept in interested. Waiting for more chapters to be added.
The writing quality is amazing! I love the way you describe the scenarios. I love the characters as well and the story is developing in an impressive way. So I think I'm going to give it five stars!
Initial reaction after seeing cover: Just another typical fantasy romance novel? After reading: God this is so much better than I expected, give me more chapters! Writing quality's great, couldn't really find any mistakes. Interesting plot development and wonderful, unique characters along with a classic fantasy world. Love it, keep it up, author.
The synopsis was great and intriguing enough to eagerly read the story. It was well-written and well-thought! When it comes to the story and characters, I personally find them really cute and light. It is like a feel-good read for me! I love it. Would read more of it in the future!
OMG I like that story! I am looking for more chapters. it is so sweaty and I like the combination between love and magic ability. "writing a 600 page as punishment" sound so crazy but I like it . I will wait for more chapters. I Highly recommended.
Slow but steady character development and a slow paced romance. Well there are a lot of characters within just the first few chapters, it seems the author will have to work extra hard developing each to its own peak. So I suggest you to you enhance them by giving them solo scene times as the story progresses as I would love to see a vamp- werewolf romance with a lot of enticing characters, but it's just a suggestion. Keep up the good work and another thing, it sometimes becomes a little confusing on who is the one saying the dialogues so take a look at that, the rest is great
I thought this would be like any normal cliché romance novel, but I never expected it to be different. Keep up the good work of your story. .