This is a book everyone should have in their library! Writing is clean and descriptive. The mc is an intriguing character so far, and I'm definitely looking forward for more. Only issue I can find is the long paragraphs. For a traditional novel, it's not a big deal, but in webnovel, the readers have a short attention span, and they'll subconsciously miss out on some sentences in long paragraphs, and you don't want that.
4 years ago
2
Wondering_Reader
I cant put anything other than 5 stars. I was reading the last chapter thinking there was another chapter…. THERE WASNT ;( you make me cry author, its just too good and you mess with my heart. If you make more chapter i will give you smooch okay?
- But seriously, the writing is great, the characters are wonderful and i absolutely love the introduction to the world. The first 5 chapters are a great introduction
4 years ago
1
Eshal_Shahnawaz
I really didn't want to give a 5 star because you made me so frustrated seeing the last chapter author! I'm yearning for more now. Great storyline and I'll surely recommend this book to everyone!
4 years ago
0
Ariel_x
A book with such a dramatic start cannot be ignored. It proves to have the quality of entertainment and adventure at a goal. Although minor issues like lack of spacing should be considered by the author. Aside that, this book can be added to the library. I highly recommend!
4 years ago
0
Jason_Auric
it's pretty good. I still don't know where the story will go, but it seems interesting so far. Not much action in first few chapters just build up.
4 years ago
0
xenzensen
As I am the author, I am going to rate my own novel 5 stars. Truly an
ingenious move. Joking aside, I really hope you are able to enjoy my work and leave a comment. After all, I don't know how others percieve my work so it would really help if ou leave some kind of commentary. Thank you for reading.
This is a book everyone should have in their library! Writing is clean and descriptive. The mc is an intriguing character so far, and I'm definitely looking forward for more. Only issue I can find is the long paragraphs. For a traditional novel, it's not a big deal, but in webnovel, the readers have a short attention span, and they'll subconsciously miss out on some sentences in long paragraphs, and you don't want that.
I cant put anything other than 5 stars. I was reading the last chapter thinking there was another chapter…. THERE WASNT ;( you make me cry author, its just too good and you mess with my heart. If you make more chapter i will give you smooch okay? - But seriously, the writing is great, the characters are wonderful and i absolutely love the introduction to the world. The first 5 chapters are a great introduction
I really didn't want to give a 5 star because you made me so frustrated seeing the last chapter author! I'm yearning for more now. Great storyline and I'll surely recommend this book to everyone!
A book with such a dramatic start cannot be ignored. It proves to have the quality of entertainment and adventure at a goal. Although minor issues like lack of spacing should be considered by the author. Aside that, this book can be added to the library. I highly recommend!
it's pretty good. I still don't know where the story will go, but it seems interesting so far. Not much action in first few chapters just build up.
As I am the author, I am going to rate my own novel 5 stars. Truly an ingenious move. Joking aside, I really hope you are able to enjoy my work and leave a comment. After all, I don't know how others percieve my work so it would really help if ou leave some kind of commentary. Thank you for reading.