The demon king had three children;The first was the traitor Meliodas, The second was the sword of the demon king his greatest warrior rivaling even meliodas easily.And the last son of the demon king Zeldris the executioner.
Very good honestly, I'm loving it, in a few chapters it made me look forward to more.
***** SPOILER *****
I found the idea of him being sealed in a different place from the other demons very interesting, just thinking about future chapters and what can happen I get excited, thank you author and please don't give up because it's very good.
4 years ago
3
Infinite_Shadow_57
Author please update this fanfic is amazing.................................................................................................
4 years ago
2
M0bius_
UPDATE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ITS SO GOOD ALREADY…,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,l,,,,,,,,,,,,,,…,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
The story start nice and the grammar is ok in my opinion
Writing Quality 4/5
Stability of Updates 5/5
Story Development 5/5
Character Design 4/5
World Background 4/5
Total : 4.4/5
have a nice day <3
4 years ago
1
Killah_King
the demon king already had three children
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Very good honestly, I'm loving it, in a few chapters it made me look forward to more. ***** SPOILER ***** I found the idea of him being sealed in a different place from the other demons very interesting, just thinking about future chapters and what can happen I get excited, thank you author and please don't give up because it's very good.
Author please update this fanfic is amazing.................................................................................................
UPDATE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ITS SO GOOD ALREADY…,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,l,,,,,,,,,,,,,,…,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Put more chapters
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The story start nice and the grammar is ok in my opinion Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 5/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 4/5 Total : 4.4/5 have a nice day <3
the demon king already had three children hdisfldyslgskdtiegeitan guy ksheihakstidhrkeifeiegdbydksidfkdhfkbdlapfelaotenkafskgdksfslgsuelfreb