Sacred Gear Shadow Light

Great concept overall, mixing two different worlds almost flawlessly while adding some original additions to the storyline to blend the two together more smoothly. The pace itself may seem kind of slow but there are time skips in there to help around that. Naruto's character also seems quite a bit different than what is depicted in the orginal series, but the author did a decent job at adding details in to explain such a thing. The only thing I dislike about it is that it involves your everyday cliche of *hiding true strength* but it seems to be picking up the pace a little in that regards after around 30-40 chaps.

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IDK what to Say pretty good Better than average you did pretty good mixing Things the big amount of chappys definitely help not the worst looking paragraphs Ive seen better but you out proform the majority Amazing story tho you definitely shuld feel proud

Llevo 5 EPISODIO Y NO PUEDO MAS no se como estaba antes de la re escritura pero como esta ahora me esta dando dolor de cabeza y no por la historia ni nada de eso , no porque la escritura no se pueda traducir o entender , sino por la terrible forma de escritura . CASI PEOR QUE LA MIA Y ESO ES UNA PUTA LOCURA

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