Great story so far and I like the character choice of Mc. Only real issue i have is your power system the way the numbers are written it just doesnt seem to flow or make sense especially with how ambitious your planning on making this story with 5 worlds. so i would tone down on technique costs and rework numbers of the different stats so it makes better sense in long run.
Great story so far and I like the character choice of Mc. Only real issue i have is your power system the way the numbers are written it just doesnt seem to flow or make sense especially with how ambitious your planning on making this story with 5 worlds. so i would tone down on technique costs and rework numbers of the different stats so it makes better sense in long run.