Misleading, should be uchiha heir not otsutuki. Also, Mc unworthy being an uchiha. Not that i say it's bad in fact this is very good novel but just misleading. I came for otsutuki not uchiha.
Its like buying a burger but instead of real meat, they give you that fake-ass meat like veg. Sure both seems the same but taste different and you can't help but feel disappointed
Maybe he'll trult be otsutuki heir (which i highly doubt) in the future or in the 25+ (where i dropped)
Anyway, I'm just giving my honest review and perhaps will even read this when i crave for some uchiha
3 years ago
50
DaoistIlY75i
Love your fanfiction. I really love it. need frequent updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3 years ago
31
Trollface
earlier, others wrote that the MC is emotionally unstable. his plans change by 10 over the course of 28 chapters. at first, he is a good guy, but in the end he became an ordinary killer ( and according to the plan it will be even worse, but I can't be sure, the author constantly changes the mc's psychopassport). I'm not interested in this lottery, so I'll get off here. ciao.
3 years ago
26
Hellish_Rabbit
Shamelessness is the second happiness
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I will continue writing this story and not going to drop it for sure. But since this is my first work, it is rather difficult to write it.
3 years ago
22
cvu1706
Reveal Spoiler
3 years ago
11
Ahmed_Mustafa_0951
....................................................................................................................................need to work on your sentences, proofreading n not using english names in a naruto fanfic
3 years ago
10
God_of_INFINITY_0_
i have not read it yet but i really wanted to see a lightning type shinobi cause i love lightning style [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
3 years ago
9
xlvlx
Honestly i’m kinda lost as the mc’s goal is like a roller coaster. Read till chp 51 and he looks like he cares for his family again? Not sure but whatever itachi did to mc i did not like it as although i rather not have a mc that has no feelings for his family, i liked his plan on getting all tailed beasts to become stronger. But after mc recoved, chp 50, he lost interest in tailed beast and is now looking for something else. Idk what he’s doing but i would like mc to still get 10 tails to improve his strength. Other than that, story was great and can mc have relationship with kaguya?
3 years ago
3
Sirione
well... the novel is good but i notice a lot of negative twists in the story that make me think the author doesn't like the mc, there are some errors about the age of the characters but i ignore that part, hope it's not harem.
Great fan-fic I really enjoy reading it, and I love how you change the word story, great job and keep a good work!!! ✨
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3 years ago
2
Ktheus
One of the most fun I've read in a long time. The author's unpredictability and how he puts the story together will never bore the reader. Just read this.
3 years ago
2
TranscendentKing
Best naruto fanfic so far. even tho u refuse to save the uchiha clan I still like the development, and please don't drop it. Is the mc gonna be single all his life? And If u want to pair him w/ someone I hope u pair him with available female(someone that is still single in the canon) like mei or tsunade(poor girl).
Reveal Spoiler
Misleading, should be uchiha heir not otsutuki. Also, Mc unworthy being an uchiha. Not that i say it's bad in fact this is very good novel but just misleading. I came for otsutuki not uchiha. Its like buying a burger but instead of real meat, they give you that fake-ass meat like veg. Sure both seems the same but taste different and you can't help but feel disappointed Maybe he'll trult be otsutuki heir (which i highly doubt) in the future or in the 25+ (where i dropped) Anyway, I'm just giving my honest review and perhaps will even read this when i crave for some uchiha
Love your fanfiction. I really love it. need frequent updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
earlier, others wrote that the MC is emotionally unstable. his plans change by 10 over the course of 28 chapters. at first, he is a good guy, but in the end he became an ordinary killer ( and according to the plan it will be even worse, but I can't be sure, the author constantly changes the mc's psychopassport). I'm not interested in this lottery, so I'll get off here. ciao.
Shamelessness is the second happiness ^^ I will continue writing this story and not going to drop it for sure. But since this is my first work, it is rather difficult to write it.
Reveal Spoiler
....................................................................................................................................need to work on your sentences, proofreading n not using english names in a naruto fanfic
i have not read it yet but i really wanted to see a lightning type shinobi cause i love lightning style [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Honestly i’m kinda lost as the mc’s goal is like a roller coaster. Read till chp 51 and he looks like he cares for his family again? Not sure but whatever itachi did to mc i did not like it as although i rather not have a mc that has no feelings for his family, i liked his plan on getting all tailed beasts to become stronger. But after mc recoved, chp 50, he lost interest in tailed beast and is now looking for something else. Idk what he’s doing but i would like mc to still get 10 tails to improve his strength. Other than that, story was great and can mc have relationship with kaguya?
well... the novel is good but i notice a lot of negative twists in the story that make me think the author doesn't like the mc, there are some errors about the age of the characters but i ignore that part, hope it's not harem.
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Great fan-fic I really enjoy reading it, and I love how you change the word story, great job and keep a good work!!! ✨ . .
One of the most fun I've read in a long time. The author's unpredictability and how he puts the story together will never bore the reader. Just read this.
Best naruto fanfic so far. even tho u refuse to save the uchiha clan I still like the development, and please don't drop it. Is the mc gonna be single all his life? And If u want to pair him w/ someone I hope u pair him with available female(someone that is still single in the canon) like mei or tsunade(poor girl).
Ótima história até agora.