Bleach: The Fifth Division Captain

The MC is not likeable at all. And the story is utterly uninteresting. I have to skip chapters after chapters to get to the interesting part. But I never found it. I really don't see what the other readers see in this story to give it such a high review.

mf felt guilty about hurting Aizen..need i say more how dumb MC is?

Very good! It had been a long time since I came across such a good Bleach fanfiction. I'm glad I found this gem! 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

A hidden gem.... translation quality is top notch, if I didn't check bros profile I would have thought it was not a translation I hope author doesn't drop it.

Я без понятие почему такое гавно имеет высокую оценку. Как по мне оно завешено и автор удаляет негативные отзывы как сын тайской ш! В целом фанфик скучный нет искры за которой можно было наблюдать. Главный герой безумной тупой и скучный он как картон.

I’ve seen many bleach fics power scale and jump from story fight to story fight. This is not such a fic, it’s modestly paced giving proper weight to relationships and growing strength. It can be both light hearted and serious. The growth of the MC and Aizen stand out as a man accustomed to being lonely finally finds a peer. I’m in no rush to get to canon simply because the world the author has written is so interesting I happy to see where it all goes.

Is this harem?? Please don't be!!! .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

This is the first book I’ve read where the MC has the instincts and emotions of a loyal dog in the body of a human. I’ve never read a book where the author wants to be pegged by a villain and swallow his load so bad….. it’s disgusting. From the moment he wanted to kneel to Aizen I lost all hope for this novel and the authors masculinity

Genuinely The best bleach fanfic I’ve ever seen it’s slow paced the mc isn’t immediately strong and builds it up through training. As for the romance it’s Isane and it’s a slow burn instead of an immediate relationship and it’s a non-harem Peak fiction.

Except for the writing quality which will get 5 stars, everything else receives a one star. That is because the author have a very bad understanding of Bleach, which simply ruins the reading experience. For example: Aizen giving an "hearty laugher" ? Not happening. In the anime students in the Shin'ō Academy are walking with their Asauchi so they can get used to them early on, while in this fanfic they have to graduate to receive their Asauchi. There are students fighting and one got so injured and is on the brink of death, yet the instructors don't care and leave the injured student there to die. Etc etc. Anyway, I'm out.

The story kinda handwaves away the MC's descent into being a villain. First they make him randomly be super grateful and trusting of Aizen, despite knowing that Aizen is an amoral sociopath in truth. Then the MC just meekly goes along with it as Aizen murders and violates people in service of his goals. There's no real discernable motivation for it either besides "I trust Aizen now". Like he's not Tosen with his noble hatred driving him to wild lengths for revenge, and he's seemingly also not planning to betray Aizen like Gin did. Honestly the MC's motivations are never really expanded on, and he feels like an empty character besides a vague "get stronger" goal

This fanfic was absolutely amazing, beyond words! I was so engrossed in the story that I devoured every single chapter without even realizing it. The plot twists, character development, and emotional depth were all superbly done. It's been a long time since I've read something this captivating. Kudos to the author for creating such a compelling and immersive world. Highly recommended to anyone looking for an exceptional read. Can't wait to see what happens next!

peak, good translation, steady updates, if anyone knows the raw please reply and tell me <3

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