Dragon Slayer In Marvel

My own Fanfic so of course I give it a 5* but if you pass through here, give my story a chance, and pls give it a fair review, and thanks

auth you have cooked with this story. i dont normally write comments, but dame so far, its great suggestion. add elements we have only seen from dragons like ireen with enchanting or selenes moon dragon magic, or natsu dragon god slayer combo. mix stuff like wind, water, and lightning for storm dragon slayer. white, shadow, and lightning for dark light lightning etc

the plot is very basic and the dialogue between character make it feel like mc is in a npc world.. and somehow mc is a son of a mother who works in xavicers instetute yet he is treated like a time bomb lol its weird asf cause they dont even treat real timebombs as they treat mc " they are literally spying on him lol" and the biggest L of them all is that while our favorite girls and marvel characters are all grown up our mc is a kiddy "5 years old" and thus its pretty easy to deduct that he will not get any girls from the favorite genereation" jean/emma/storm/blackwidow etc etc" of super heroes in marvel cause most of them have watched him grow up from 5 years and up lol so yeah thats a big L . the writing is good iguess but because of the dialogue and plot/story is very basic it kinda drags down the whole story + with my own opinion of the mc being a kiddy while all my favorite girls and super heroes is grown ups , thats why i gave it such a low score :)

the more i read the more i thinks that its the author himself who is 6 years old child .not given it a bad review but im skipping this story .i have seen 5years old naruto mc who where more mature then this. a bit of a disappointment ,it started good

I don't like the fact that the protagonist is so small compared to the other characters. And furthermore, he is the typical cliché protagonist with incredible acting abilities, it is boring to always see a protagonist who can act like a child without any difficulty, that happens in all novels, what little originality.

Novel is very way to plain, Mc is born with a dragon slayer magic system but bcz his mother is mutant under Charles school she send him to mutant school. There Mc is many times is deemed as a time bomb and how they'll be controlling him making a better person out of him. Mc should have left the school the moment they rejected his killing of a villain, as their is a option of joining Karma Taj... Even without Ancient One they'll teach him for the betterment of earth. Author then makes a plot of his 2 friends betraying him joining Magneto, while 2 of them were killed and Rouge getting kidnapped on their first mission?? Doesn't every Marvel fan know that Magneto has spies in school and cameras in Charles study using Mystique. There's too many loop holes and too much extra details making the story looks like crawling slowly at the beginning and then suddenly new things are introduced to keep up the pace and timeline of the MCU.

mc is way too emotional, it never really feels like a reincarnation, it feels just like an OC interacting with the world. it reads like an AI novel. uncanny valley, something thats just not quite right. the mc has classic anime rages when his friends are hurt, powerups like natsu would when hes angry, and he yells out his moves like 'fire dragon roar!'. made me wanna dig a hole and die in it. anyway, trash novel, mc may have well have been an OC, because his knowledge literally never matters, and its probably an AI novel.

oooooooooooooooooooooooo this is it , this is it oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo it's gone bel nice time reading this one , my lord thank you

Love the story, only on chapter 5 but wanted to leave a good review to counter the bad one

nice keep updating and one more thing AUTHOR DON'T DROP THIS NOVEL PLEASE

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it took 40 chapters for it to get GOOD but GODDAMN DID IT HIT THE SPOT When it did please don't drop it 👍..................................................

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