I Awoke As Uzumaki Naruto
Where do souls go after death?
After arriving at the sereitei, a nameless soul got to live a life full of twists and turns, and after it died again, regaining the memories of his past life as a human, and using his knowledge over the soul he acquired on his second life, together with the immense power he absorbed before dying, led his soul to be reborn, but this time on another world.
-= DISCLAIMER: I do not own Naruto or anything related to it, i only own my OC's and sometimes I don't own even my own OC's =-
This is my first fic so expect: not so good jokes, overused memes, bad character personality interpretation, plot holes, strange decisions on where the plot will go and stuff like that.
Also English is not my main language so expect : grammar errors and stupid word choices sometimes
Thanks for reading my fic
Cheers~
I loved it, in chapter 9 it had 4.5 stars, but having other transmigrants, I dropped it in chapter 10 (- 2.5 stars) ................................................
dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc
Two things mc revealed everything to kurama And i decided to drop cause im legitimately sick Of swords i have read I dont even know how many fics like almost 2k or maybe more and its ridiculous how many fics use them im think around 70-80% use it
-> the grammar could be better, but it's readable. story development is rushed and lacks detail. if you want the naruto story with a lot of comedy, little detail and little depth in the plot, this is for you.
the writing is weird the dialogues are too short the characters' relationships are too forced and there are a lot of things the original characters wouldn't do
It's a really great story and I want Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrreeeeeeeee. Thanks for the story author and pls don't drop it
got to 12. then a bomb of OC and OP enemies. went very weird. seemed good till then. vvvvbvvvvvvvvv vvvvbvvvvvvvvv vvvvbvvvvvvvvv bbvbbbbbbbbbbbb
I love it even though the pace is too fast, but the dlc characters debut kinda throw me off. I can't read it, sorry. I hope you can foreshadow it better and not "surprise madafaka" us. Til next time
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This looks like it’s going to be amazing, please keep up the hard work!👍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍🤩🤩👍🤩🤩🤩🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩🤩😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆😁😁😄😄😃😃😀😀😄😁
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Was good until chapter 10, then some weird stuff happens. But it's your story Author so write what you want, just isn't my kind of story.
What I have to say would have been to much for the comments So hear it is. For the MC being to op it all depends on how you want it to end, either in naruto’s era with a few chapters of happy ever after(introducing kids, there personalities, mothers……etc). While maybe some multiverse travel to bleach universe like it was implied. Or Do your own version of Baruto era which maybe harder to write, while multiversing to many universes just doesn’t fit this novel. It would be better to start a new novel or risk lowering the quality of this one. Just as a reminder I love this novel and everything I said is just my opinion Write Whatever You Want!!!!
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