You know...
I never understood what people find so fascinating about the world. To me it all looks the same. It's just a planet. It's just a big rock floating in space. It's just a tiny speck of dirt in this vast universe. It doesnt matter what type of world it is. It'll always look the same to me.
...to think these were my last thoughts...
How... cliche.
(I changed some things up so you might want to go back and read it again)
this is a very interesting and fun novel and I realy hope that you update it soon and don't drop it looking forward to more chapters (these are words so I could add the review)
Awesome read! BUt like when are you going to update the book? You need to update the other books as wel…. js. For reals though, I think your writing has really improved