Naruto: The Wandering Blacksmith
Ryu lives with his father, Haru, in a small village in the land of water where he helps his father with their blacksmithing business. However, the father and son pair are not as they seem.
When Shinobi appear on their doorsteps looking to kill them, Ryu is forced to venture into the harsh world of Shinobi with only the Transformation Jutsu that his father taught him for blacksmithing. Watch Ryu as he hones his skill and becomes a legend the likes of which have never been seen in the multiverse. (By the way, the tag says OP for a reason, Ryu will end up so broken. Like OAA level. And there won't be any cheats, Ryu will discover the multiverse and explore it all with his own power. If you're wondering how such heresy is possible, especially in a Naruto fic, go read the fanfic. Honestly, I made it my personal mission to torment all the power scalers that will read this.)
I don't own the image, I can barely write my name in an understandable way much less draw something like that, so if the original artist (TorinoGT from what I found on Wallpaper Abyss) wants it taken down message me.
I also don't own Naruto, but I think that's obvious. I mean, if I did own it, I sure as hell wouldn't write fanfictions about it... I'd also be rich :-(
One last thing, as of writing this, I'm on what's called in my country "Year of Service" where we go volunteer for a year around the country before going to the military. The workdays are 13~ hours and I live with like 7 other people in a tiny apartment so that's fun. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that my upload schedule will be awful and one chapter a week will be lucky, so be warned.
It's really bad, first he can't even write kunai, it's always Kuni, that really drove me crazy xD, second the plot is non-existent and full of holes, and the personality of the MC doesn't make sense. The general concept of the novel is good, but the execution is nefarious, the only thing that can save this is a rewrite, not before some time to work more in the plot, the personality of the MC, the grammar... basically everything
The start is really good then it suddenly goes from 100 to 0 in 1 chapter. Characters making really stupid decisions Mc's father a ninja who knows jutsu almost died to a normal guard The plot is so forced This story could have been really good
It's bad They isn't any blacksmithing Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad Bad bad bad
To be honest it would have made more sense if the world was danmachi it would have been amazing reading that but this to is great. But If you have time try making it a danmachi story with the same setting but am still liking the story the same
Honestly, the story has tons of potential, but I feel it was executed poorly. First of all the Mc just has the ability to turn anything into whatever he feels like because apparently he is a genius in transformation jutsu, which makes no sense. Then there is the fact that he this random blacksmith child beat multiple ninjas without training. Then he slaves himself away to konaha because he is an Uchiha, which is possibly the stupidest decision so far. At least danzo can get two free eyes. Also, I know writing is hard, so don't feel bad about my critique. It's just how I feel about the story.
Reveal Spoiler
He should be paired with TenTen if you ever add romance since they’re both blacksmiths and weapon fanatics.
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Thoughts so far, I dont think this is how the transformation technique works, like at all. I feel like if you could use it to have extra limbs then we would have seen countless people use that in other scenarios. Author states his reason for seeing the transformation jutsu as so op is naruto turning bunta (an adult sage toad) into the 9 tails but the only reason that was possible is because it was Naruto doing it. I'm only on chapter 3 and I feel like author is just going to attempt to abuse this jutsu in ways it can't be used
I don't want to write that much, but just know that this story is really good.
I rarely Review and this will be a short one just to let everyone know that the start is just slow world & character & plot building but once you get to chapter 30 it becomes a really interesting story as how the author gave him a unique ability that will let him grow to be a very overpowered character/person in a short amount of time if used right by the character. in conclusion read to the end of chapter 30 and if you don't like it by then, you should stop. but most likely you will keep reading as the author has some interesting/ingenious ideas on how to use the MC's chakra/powers/jutsu
this is really good but the writing style gets really monotonous during the fight scenes, like the thrill type of feeling is not present in the fighting scenes. I really hope you will try to rectify that.Thanks for the Fanfiction.😌
كنت ابحث منذ زمن طويل عن رواية معحبين عن المهن الداعمة كالطب او الحدادة او الكيمياء اوغيرها ولم اجد عندما. وجدت هذا الكنز بالصدفة افكار ابداعية. من عالم ناروتو باسلوب منطقي ترابط وتطور الشخصية مذهل استمر لقد استمتعت كثيرا
the story is good and I hope it doesn't get dropped, although the story is about op mc, mc's strength doesn't increase steadily or fluidly , he instantly gets absurd power ups and it's really fast, one second he is above civilian-level the next he can barely survive/kill jounin-level nin, then he gains a big power up and unlocked some big potential but is very laid back because he can easily defeat beings like third hokage/jiraya although mc already became a top dog in naruto, it's a multiverse fic so I'm Looking forward to the next world and I hope the absurd power ups are tuned down a bit
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