i just saw your book while trying to search for crime stories and books and i find your novel so i decided to read it and i didn't know at first that its your first time publishing your works because the writing quality was not for a beginner so i was shocked but i really like it and im so excited for other chapters[img=update][img=fp]
3 years ago
3
slaytheking2
i wish i was like jacob, he's smart and curious about random things so he learns about them but im always lazy asf, and btw Ryan using the little boy just to see if his product works as he want it so he can sell it to felix is such a stupid idea and a stupid reason now i get it why you named the chapter with this name lol
3 years ago
2
Kawtar_Afkir
I really loved these two chapters and I can’t wait to read more of this
And I loved Jacob’s character because I feel like in chapter 1 I kinda relate to him cs he’s a person who overthink too much like me and I’m really proud of the writer 💓 keep going
3 years ago
2
DaoisteQv7pZ
I'm enjoying this book it is so gooooood, this is the genre that i like the characters developement is perfect and each chapter you will find new characters i can't wait for the new chapters and the author really did a great job at writing this even thought it's not her/his first language so that's a good thing actually.
Thank you to whoever is reading my first book and supporting it , I'm so happy to see the readers enjoying it even thought its my first time publishing my works, I promise that I'll work hard on my writing skills and upload the other chapters as fast as possible but as you know its school now so its hard for me to focus on both things but I'll try my best to stay updated.
3 years ago
1
Marwa_Aljabri
Actually it's impressive that you write that good in your first novel. I'm really curious about what's gonna happen between Jacob and the psycho and i hope you update more often.
IT you nice keep going XD
3 years ago
1
_Emily127_
Omg i love reading about psychopaths and watching thriller and crime movies, and i found your book im so lucky, i dont know what's gonna happen to the boy after saying that sentence to Ryan but as its your first time uploading a novel i did not expect the suspense that you did at the end of every chapter awesome👍👍
3 years ago
1
DaoisteQv7pZ
The characters are so good for someone who is publishing his works for the first time you did an amazing job, the writing quality is not that bad actually im so excited to read the next chapters good luck
3 years ago
1
smruti_0052
I really love this like the plot of the story and the emotions in it and the way everything is expressed 🤗💚I'll be waiting for the next chapters.
i just saw your book while trying to search for crime stories and books and i find your novel so i decided to read it and i didn't know at first that its your first time publishing your works because the writing quality was not for a beginner so i was shocked but i really like it and im so excited for other chapters[img=update][img=fp]
i wish i was like jacob, he's smart and curious about random things so he learns about them but im always lazy asf, and btw Ryan using the little boy just to see if his product works as he want it so he can sell it to felix is such a stupid idea and a stupid reason now i get it why you named the chapter with this name lol
I really loved these two chapters and I can’t wait to read more of this And I loved Jacob’s character because I feel like in chapter 1 I kinda relate to him cs he’s a person who overthink too much like me and I’m really proud of the writer 💓 keep going
I'm enjoying this book it is so gooooood, this is the genre that i like the characters developement is perfect and each chapter you will find new characters i can't wait for the new chapters and the author really did a great job at writing this even thought it's not her/his first language so that's a good thing actually.
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Thank you to whoever is reading my first book and supporting it , I'm so happy to see the readers enjoying it even thought its my first time publishing my works, I promise that I'll work hard on my writing skills and upload the other chapters as fast as possible but as you know its school now so its hard for me to focus on both things but I'll try my best to stay updated.
Actually it's impressive that you write that good in your first novel. I'm really curious about what's gonna happen between Jacob and the psycho and i hope you update more often. IT you nice keep going XD
Omg i love reading about psychopaths and watching thriller and crime movies, and i found your book im so lucky, i dont know what's gonna happen to the boy after saying that sentence to Ryan but as its your first time uploading a novel i did not expect the suspense that you did at the end of every chapter awesome👍👍
The characters are so good for someone who is publishing his works for the first time you did an amazing job, the writing quality is not that bad actually im so excited to read the next chapters good luck
I really love this like the plot of the story and the emotions in it and the way everything is expressed 🤗💚I'll be waiting for the next chapters.