The Mysterious Evolution
The most anomaly and secretive scientific project in history, VILER-D was being aborted because of failure. No human trial of the experiment was alive. Unexpectedly at the last moment before it completely closed down, an infant of fifteen weeks survived. Nobody knew what changes the child would go through...
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The secrets of having superpowers and highly sensitive senses have haunted me for a long time.
I feel as if someone is controlling my mind and body. My feelings, reactions and character modify with the passage of time.
After surviving the attempted assassination, I, Biva, found clues regarding my abnormality.
I disguised myself so I could live peacefully without disturbances. But sadly, to survive in the cruel world, I have to find my identity and eliminate the danger.
I have no choice but to strike back, be ruthless, and take revenge on those who hurt me or my dearest one.
I don't want to live as a prisoner. I aspire to be free and soar in the sky.
Despite everything, someone in the dark, my shadow, attempts to deprive me of my desires.
Will my wish to find my parents, feel unconditional love and care ever be fulfilled?
## It's my journey to find who I am and explore the mysteries behind my mysterious evolution with my fellow partners.##
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"Biva, did you have a hand in the destruction of Wega?"
"Why only a hand? I solely destroyed it."
"WHAT? That was my blood, sweat, and tears; my entire life; WHY? Are you a psychopath, Biva?"
"Maybe I am....."
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Note: This is an original story written by me.
Disclaimer: The cover is edited by me but I don't own the pictures. Credit goes to the owner.
Before anything, Author why did you write tge first chapter in third-person and the second chapter in first-person prespective? 😅 Anyways, the story is finely written, typos here and there but nothing too much of a problem. The mc seems somewhat cocky and arrogant type to me, can’t say i hate or love that, since she was (only my guess) bullied due to her special circumstances. Anyways, Nice work author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]
Captivating first chapter that introduced the MC in a dire state. I was kept on my toes as I wondered whether she would survive or not. Thankfully she did survive in a mysterious way and she planned to find out what happened to her. The intensity of the first chapter was watered down in the following chapters. Focus and character personality seem to change somewhat. Proper editing would do the story wonders as minor typing and wording mistakes often takes the joy away from reading. Other than that, a job well done 👍
This novel was amazing. A fresh breath indeed away from all one genre. I like the FL, She wasn't all cold, despite so much suffering. She has her sides too, intresting ones. You are brilliant author to write this story.....keep the hard work going on...
Writing Quality: At first, it was written in a third-person perspective and shifted to first-person in the second chap. This technique is very easy to mess up but the author pulled it off. The narration paints images in our minds. Not overly descriptive nor too less. Just enough. Story Development: It started with a woman being injured. And if I'm understanding it right, she has a regeneration skill. Since I haven't read that far ahead yet, I wonder if magic was normal in this world. Or were the monks she's living with know about it, at least? Stability of Updates: So far so good. Character Design: I couldn't say much at this point because as I said, I haven't read that far ahead yet. But looking at the first three chaps, I have the impression of her as an aloof type of person. She doesn't like to interact with people very much which made me wonder if she had any traumatic experience with dealing with people considering she was injured so badly in the opening scene. Or was that just her personality? World-Building: What I LOVE about this was the world-building wasn't thrown as an exposition but instead, given to us bits by bits. I love it that way as it gives me a sense that the author trusts its readers. [Keep it up, Author.]
From the starting line of the story. It Tooks me into story (imaginative) world..The story and main character Bive is amazing, fearless and unbelievable... Story line makes reader hooked and suspense... Thank you amazing story😀 Really very excited for more........
This is really one hck of novels... honestly, it keep hanging there to find out, what next. The pace is great & how it intristically mde you want more & more. kudo's to author... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] keep it up.
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From the Blurb alone I already became intrigued by this wonderful masterpiece . The writer did a great job to come up with such wonderful novel. Each chapter is interesting that you would find yourself glue to the novel. This is a must read, and please kindly update author 🥺🥺
Such an intriguing start. The book is crafted well in such a way it is easy to read. The flow is perfect. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love what u did there . .it's not rushed and not slow. this is a nice book. And grammar is just top notch. I will say that the only down side might be the updating stability .... drop more pls
A great read! Although I do like it when a bunch of info is thrown into my face when reading sci-fi, I do like the simplicity of yours. Characters seem to be greatly build, and so does the plot. Keep up the good work!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The first chapter was magical. I wanted to know if the MC would die but she didn't and the rest was just epic. It was like I was watching a movie where I was kept in suspense. I could imagine everything in my head. Signs of this novel being a big hit
Wowww! Finally found such a unique novel after a while , the story progression is amazing and want you to read as many chapters you can in one go, the update speed is fast and author did an amazing job with this novel😊😊😊😊
the sypnosis of this book is amazing and prologue us enough to get any science fiction fans hooked though the journey of fl is filled with thorns but she gains some amazing experience in it.
Character and the story is fine, just work well on the development of the story. If you tell more of her abilities that will be better . Do your best.